Hey you there! You boy! Yeah you, come here!
Hell, I know you 48 years old but a man ain’t nothin’ but a size extra-large boy pretendin’
he know why he wake up stinkin’ and coughin’ and fornicatin’ every day. So shut up and listen.
Boy I been watchin’ you for some weeks now,
Drivin’ that po’ pitiful wreck back an’ forth
to a job barely pay you 90 cents a day,
then goin’ home to that seven-foot woman
beatin’ on your butt like Ali hungry for his comeback.
It’s true boy, I sho nuff been watchin’ you sittin’ on
the toilet bowl of life, dreaming all the things some nice
hot prune juice could do for your constipated dispossession.
Singing your Lysol blues till they turn all funky red.
Well, boy, I want you to know:
I’m here to cry for your wretched behind
cause chances are nobody else gon give a shit.
So here, take this first tear for that time
you told your daddy you loved him
and he didn’t have a clue who you or your mama was.
This second tear is for when you stopped this morning
to smell some roses and three seagulls stopped to wipe
their rumps on your head. Damn nasty feathered heathens.
But we can’t cry just for ourselves, so this next batch of tears
is for the amputated refugees of Sierra Leone and the
genocide children of Rwanda and Somalia, yes, and no,
for the raped flesh of the earth and the prostituted genius of poets,
O’ for the sorrows and horrors of this world I slam
the drums of my blood and who dares dance with me!?
For the power-drunk tyrants and junkie-fevered bombers,
for the drowned prophets of Haiti and the slaughtered
humbles of Asia I weep a crimson tsunami of exploded hearts.
O’ for the shame and pain of this life I belch the nails
of my tormented soul and who dares howl with me!?
Damn, boy, this crying for the world can wear your ass out.
Did I tell you I fell asleep under a bridge for 20 years
and while I dreamed people used and abused me bad?
Still I got a head like a hammer and a heart like the moon.
All kinds’a things we could cry for in this world
but then I noticed that same seven-foot woman
who slapped your butt upside down came home yesterday
with brand new twin boys look just like you.
And that uncle who boots you used to polish
Sent out a letter sayin’ he leavin’ you everything he got.
Funny how life stab one cheek then kiss the other.
We can cry for years but sometimes gotta smile too.
You want this handkerchief I just blew my nose on?
Since we cryin’ here together boy I’ll give it to you for free.
Aberjhani
©5/12/2005
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this poem keeps me there in the absence of the music.....Go head Mr. Window....BigSmiles
sound like home
I'm saving this one Aberjhani...
Perfect!
Vesna*
other than...You Sir, have a helluva voice!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)
Awful, Audacious, Awesome!
Eileen
I am awed in your use of casual, yet-not, 'home-feeling' talk, from one wise/older, not in relative years, per se, but in thoughts, male to his counterpart of mind-youth and age. An extremely interpersonal 'lesson', again, couched with a hint of earned malicious relish by the wise/old mind, that beats into the senses with a crazy, merry-go-round music and lilt of unmitigated disaster which is palpable, the knowingly instigated 'disaster' of continued human conditioning.
I ached with understanding of our collective duplicity with all the examples proferred, I cringed when I thought how I didn't try, or want, to get involved. I wondered if the young-mind's face changed with what the old-man spieled him with, if he wanted it to get through, or if, it was not his time of 'epiphany'. And, I wonder what came next...
Did lives change? Could crying for a world, in the end, really lead to a solution, if taken in the compounded magnitude of the numbers who have cried, are crying and will cry?
Cries are a means of keening. Keening is a signal to its fellows that there is great sorrow and something terribly wrong that is needing to be conveyed and shared. Louie was keening, is a keener, a signaler, a warning-bringer, to be keened back to in reply, and then keened forward to share with others.
I think Louie shared so much more than his cried-upon-hankerchief with the young-minds, I think he shared the key to our possible salvation.
Thank you, Poet Aberjhani, your words, in their shifting, evolving, conjuring, image mastering and manipulating, your interplay with the Usness of all our souls, light and dark, included with the more potent good and evil, create outstanding Social and persoanl poetry that electrifies many mind pathways I hadn't known existed in my conscious.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Love tinka
A live depicting of life and living mixed with esoteric messages to strike minds to think. "Louie the Madman Cries for the World" flows
from reality to acts of now, which can show the addresses of those that violate the American Constitution under the blessings of the
Honorable Congress of The United States of America.
May we one day have a legal Government in the USA.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Paul;-]
I am struck speechless by the power of this write--it had me laughing, jumpin' up and celebrating, and then slammed me to the ground with bitter tears. The IMAGERY...the EMOTION....GOD! This write has it all--thank you, I'm saving this one.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(