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Louie the Madman Cries for the World

by Aberjhani — Read all 107 poems by Aberjhani

Thursday, May 12, 2005


 

Hey you there! You boy! Yeah you, come here!
Hell, I know you 48 years old  but a man ain’t nothin’ but a size extra-large boy pretendin’
he know why he wake up stinkin’ and coughin’
and fornicatin’ every day. So shut up and listen.
Boy I been watchin’ you for some weeks now,
Drivin’ that po’ pitiful wreck back an’ forth
to a job barely pay you 90 cents a day,
then goin’ home to that seven-foot woman
beatin’ on your butt like Ali hungry for his comeback.
It’s true boy, I sho nuff been watchin’ you sittin’ on
the toilet bowl of life, dreaming all the things some nice
hot prune juice could do for your constipated dispossession.
Singing your Lysol blues till they turn all funky red.

Well, boy, I want you to know:
I’m here to cry for your wretched behind
cause chances are nobody else gon give a shit.
So here, take this first tear for that time
you told your daddy you loved him
and he didn’t have a clue who you or your mama was.
This second tear is for when you stopped this morning
to smell some roses and three seagulls stopped to wipe
their rumps on your head. Damn nasty feathered heathens.

But we can’t cry just for ourselves, so this next batch of tears
is for the amputated refugees of Sierra Leone and the
genocide children of Rwanda and Somalia, yes, and no,
for the raped flesh of the earth and the prostituted genius of poets,
O’ for the sorrows and horrors of this world I slam
the drums of my blood and who dares dance with me!?
For the power-drunk tyrants and junkie-fevered bombers,
for the drowned prophets of Haiti and the slaughtered
humbles of Asia I weep a crimson tsunami of exploded hearts.
O’ for the shame and pain of this life I belch the nails
of my tormented soul and who dares howl with me!?

Damn, boy, this crying for the world can wear your ass out.
Did I tell you I fell asleep under a bridge for 20 years
and while I dreamed people used and abused me bad?
Still I got a head like a hammer and a heart like the moon.
All kinds’a things we could cry for in this world
but then I noticed that same seven-foot woman
who slapped your butt upside down came home yesterday
with brand new twin boys look just like you.
And that uncle who boots you used to polish
Sent out a letter sayin’ he leavin’ you everything he got.

Funny how life stab one cheek then kiss the other.
We can cry for years but sometimes gotta smile too.
You want this handkerchief I just blew my nose on?
Since we cryin’ here together boy I’ll give it to you for free.

Aberjhani
©5/12/2005

 
 
 
 

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Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on June 3, 2005
been caught-up an old collection of tape in them Arrested Development
this poem keeps me there in the absence of the music.....Go head Mr. Window....BigSmiles


sound like home

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on May 31, 2005
This is pure genious! Wow!!
I'm saving this one Aberjhani...
Perfect!

Vesna*

Reviewed by Seth Mullins (Reader)
Reviewed on May 28, 2005
I wish I'd been warned to strap myself in for this ride! Is this recittal? It's chanted, ranted, raged wept and cherished...maybe I haven't read enough, but I can only remember a few times when I've encountered this kind of hellfire and brimstones delivery - notably the end of Rimbaud's "Memoire" and Allen Ginsberg's "Howl". Genius, I say.

Reviewed by jacqueline amos
Reviewed on May 27, 2005
This excellent continue to teach

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on May 27, 2005
Wow this is outstanding!

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on May 17, 2005
There isn't much I could add to all of the fantastic reviews
other than...You Sir, have a helluva voice!

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on May 15, 2005
OMG, one minute I'm laughing and the next I'm crying. Just like life. The dialogue is fantastic. That old character is alive on this page, and funny as sh--! The dichotomy between the humorous 'tell it like it is' attitude and the lamentation of the world's misery is striking and powerful. Have you ever been a playwrite, Aberjhani? Exceptional write!

Reviewed on May 14, 2005
The depth of this poem and its tongue-in-cheek monoloque has captured my attention from beginning to end. This can only be work of a genius. Brilliant write, Aberjhani!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 14, 2005
the energy of this poem reverberates through me ... social unrest, poetic pathos and the dire need to be redeemed of world madness explodes from within the core of this ourstanding poem ... yes, i howl with you!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 14, 2005
Wisdom out of rant. Powerfully captivating verses, Aberjhani. Thank you for sharing this offering. Humbly yours. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on May 14, 2005
A most extraordinary write that encapsulates such a roller-coaster ride of thought, emotion and imagery! Wow! It rocks and rolls so neat like blue suede shoes but tellin it raw like War. I've just got to keep this cos it aint one for snackin on... can I borrow your hanky?! "I weep a crimson tsunami of exploded hearts. O' for the shame and pain of this life I belch the nails of my tormented soul and who dares howl with me!?" - just awesome. I salute you. TY Kate xx

Reviewed by The Smoking Poet
Reviewed on May 13, 2005
Because we can't just cry for ourselves. Story and truth interwoven, and your words pulse with life and painful meaning. Wonderful.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 12, 2005
Irreverent,Incriminating,Ingenious!
Awful, Audacious, Awesome!

Eileen

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on May 12, 2005
My goodness this is a masterpiece of advice and lamentation. Really outstanding write.

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on May 12, 2005
This is pure brilliance, Master Poet Aberjhani, couched with such deep, abject-subtle pathos, I am still shaken up and stunned with all you jam-packed into my soul!

I am awed in your use of casual, yet-not, 'home-feeling' talk, from one wise/older, not in relative years, per se, but in thoughts, male to his counterpart of mind-youth and age. An extremely interpersonal 'lesson', again, couched with a hint of earned malicious relish by the wise/old mind, that beats into the senses with a crazy, merry-go-round music and lilt of unmitigated disaster which is palpable, the knowingly instigated 'disaster' of continued human conditioning.

I ached with understanding of our collective duplicity with all the examples proferred, I cringed when I thought how I didn't try, or want, to get involved. I wondered if the young-mind's face changed with what the old-man spieled him with, if he wanted it to get through, or if, it was not his time of 'epiphany'. And, I wonder what came next...

Did lives change? Could crying for a world, in the end, really lead to a solution, if taken in the compounded magnitude of the numbers who have cried, are crying and will cry?

Cries are a means of keening. Keening is a signal to its fellows that there is great sorrow and something terribly wrong that is needing to be conveyed and shared. Louie was keening, is a keener, a signaler, a warning-bringer, to be keened back to in reply, and then keened forward to share with others.

I think Louie shared so much more than his cried-upon-hankerchief with the young-minds, I think he shared the key to our possible salvation.

Thank you, Poet Aberjhani, your words, in their shifting, evolving, conjuring, image mastering and manipulating, your interplay with the Usness of all our souls, light and dark, included with the more potent good and evil, create outstanding Social and persoanl poetry that electrifies many mind pathways I hadn't known existed in my conscious.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on May 12, 2005
good one

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 12, 2005
While crazy old Louie the Madman was getting down with the harsh and sad wails, complete with tears, of rage and frustration and a few chuckles, he was also stepping on board the midnight train to ecstasy and projecting the cool glow of the hip and with the hip, wonderment of what passes for happiness and joy. We can only be happy that he found someone to pass all that wisdom, never mind the bread, unto. Righteous write!

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on May 12, 2005
Strikes the ear very much like a good dramatic monologue, rambling on with the precious wisdom of a weathered old man, stories in and out, even in the wrinkles of his body, the kind of old fella that hangs with his cane in his very loose shirt and trousers held up by suspenders on corner stoops or in barbershops. He is overloooked by the swift and proud, always named something like "Crazy Joe," but treasured by those who know how to listen, who see how he's tuned to the wind. I enjoyed this very much. Yeah, life's tough, but can we lighten up sometimes already? And I won't tell the rest. It'll spoil the ending for people who read reviews first. ~~. ;-) ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 12, 2005
Very powerful all rounder ...all kinda emotions hits you in this one!!

Love tinka

Reviewed on May 12, 2005


A live depicting of life and living mixed with esoteric messages to strike minds to think. "Louie the Madman Cries for the World" flows
from reality to acts of now, which can show the addresses of those that violate the American Constitution under the blessings of the
Honorable Congress of The United States of America.

May we one day have a legal Government in the USA.


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on May 12, 2005
Lol this has brought a wry knowing smile to my face master poet, your words as always hold so many sagacious truths...pass the hankerchief...awesome write my friend.

Paul;-]

Reviewed on May 12, 2005
Aberjhani,

I am struck speechless by the power of this write--it had me laughing, jumpin' up and celebrating, and then slammed me to the ground with bitter tears. The IMAGERY...the EMOTION....GOD! This write has it all--thank you, I'm saving this one.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(


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