Have you heard the song of the black skylark?
That creature of burning black leaves
found often at midnight on top the gleaming sphere
of Savannah’s city hall.
Or sometimes just outside the windows
of those about to die or those being born.
People tell tales, and tales
adorn themselves with legend.
There is one story about a waitress,
she was somebody’s mama and daughter,
about 20 or 30, half Muslim, half Jewish,
on her way home walking down Bay street
around 3 a.m. when a manbeast strolled
out of an alley and struck her to the ground.
His thick hands had already torn through
her blouse, and pointed teeth like razors
sliced her skirt and muscular thighs.
A naked rage jutted from his crotch
and dripped hot ignorance all over
the woman’s exposed flesh. Just above
the street where they struggled, there in the window
of a second-floor apartment was another
man and woman watching the manbeast
rattle fury all over the screaming waitress.
They watched until overtaken by a heat
that slammed them banging against the windowsill.
And that was when the sound came.
It curved like a screeching arrow
arching up out of the river behind city hall
but at the same time that sound fell,
like a smoking moon shouting out prophecies,
it rolled down the street like a hurricane of jazz singers
and exploded out the sky like a god of love
outraged by the shadow of his own apathy.
The street shook and the manbeast emptied like a pig.
In the middle of their kiss, the couple in the window
erupted nausea from one mouth to the other.
The song of the black skylark blossomed
into a tidal wave of molten earth
that swallowed the manbeast whole
and flooded the window of the blissless couple
like a huge shroud of death stink with horror.
When silence descended over the street
the waitress lay on her back thinking she was dead.
Then slowly her eyes opened. She claimed later
that a large black bird, something other
than crow or a raven, was standing on top
of a man’s skull. One arm of the skeleton
pointed up as if in recognition of a vision.
This bird, she said, suddenly flared like a heaven
then shrunk into a silhouette against the full moon.
From that impossible distance she could hear the bird
until the flow of its roar pulled her to her feet
and she looked up again, this time to see two more
skeletons fallen against a window in an apartment
above the street. Like anybody would have done,
she began to run. As she went past city hall
the bird landed on its dome and began singing.
Many people said they both heard and saw it
just as the sun was rising. And the rain that fell
from a clear sky that morning, they all claimed, were the tears
of the sun, and that bird, weeping for the dead.
by Aberjhani
(from Visions of Skylark Dressed in Black)
Elizabeth
Peace.
RAge
Judy Meeker
are not going to find superlatives that are great enough. TOO
good. . .impossible not to be jealous of your talents. Way you
have developed and honed them! ~~ As for Savannah, I fell in
love with the city the minute I saw it. Now I am more determined
than ever to go back. As for the award, it was a shoe-in...shoo-in?
Forgot how to spell it! Speaking of spells, you weave a mighty one. . .just when I think you've reached the epitome, you top
yourself. Make me want to work harder and study more. Congratulations and . . .t h a n k s !!! 'Pea' <3
". . . but at the same time that sound fell,
like a smoking moon shouting out prophecies,
it rolled down the street like a hurricane of jazz singers
and exploded out the sky like a god of love
outraged by the shadow of his own apathy."
It would be an honor for any writer to be mentored by you and the way you makes poem-stories come to life with such social significance. This was wonderful. . . apologize for not being able to read more (big cruise sale starting in our business, you know how that goes!) but I needed to take some time and just be "here" again, in 'your corner of the den."
Blessin's, and many wonderful congratulations for being recognized by ConnectSavannah. I know others will be encouraged by your example. (I, for one, am encouraged Bro. A.)
cynth'ya
with a remembrance of Christ and His burden of bearing the sins of the world and the darkness that day described in metaphor. Incredible poetry. (Must have this book. Ashamed that I haven't purchased it by now.) Congrats on those fine people of Savannah declaring their good taste in art!
Lin
in total awe of your talents. I especially
love these lines, "A naked rage jutted from his crotch
and dripped hot ignorance all over
the woman’s exposed flesh". Your
striking word mural hypnotizes me to
look at it again and again.
Amy
blows me away.
pax A
Ron
Allen
my library of course!!
superb write..but then again all your writes ARE!!
Master Poet Aberjhani..
Vesna
Excellent, Aberjhani!
Take care,
Sherry
Paul;-)
~~martin~~
So many things come to mind as I read the poem "Song of the Black Skylark." The thought that rushed me first when I read it months ago was, "WOW! That brother has one kick-butt announcement. What an exceptionally bold presentation of his essence as artist and clarion to the masses!" Reading the poem again tonight in light of your being chosen by Connect Savannah's readership as the best poet and spoken word artist in your city and in light of your choosing this poem to say thank you to your fellow Savannahians, I am struck by its metaphor--the woman as city, her heritage a blend of strife and uneasy blood, unprotected and left to a rape by humanity's baser motivations. Furthermore, those who should help only gawk to arousal, getting off on her misfortunes. The song of the poet is a a cry for justice, one loud enough to balance the scales, and a gift of healing that transforms and brings peace through poetic evocation. Oh, I could say more, reflecting on the artist Pleasant's honor by the city, on the implications of Dr. Mack's anthropological work and Savannah's reinterpretation of tortured history, and you still in your hometown, living long enough to see sweet recognition. I could ponder the meanings, but I won't. I'll leave you to your good news and say congratulations again. It seems you were born for such a time as this. The people have chosen well. You are a marvel. :-) ~~Peace. Nordette
Eileen
xxxx dove
With respect,
Sage
Flashing through my imagination, "Song of the Black Skylark" played a full lenght motion picture for the audience of the intelligences of my brain.
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
A tour de force of epic literary proportions...
You truly deserve your nomination as Savannah's leading poet, as you communicate supremely words of passion and eloquence with sheer beauty and compulsion
Peter
Regis
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
With writes like this, that clearly captures what Savannah is, I can see why you were named "Best Poet." This is full of charm and beauty; you've done good here. Nay. Really good. Well done, and congratulations!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Thank you from a fellow Savannahian.
Susan