Slivered moon is waxing crescent
Thirty eight percent illumination eclipsed by dark sun
Thoughts run on Mercury track in a black train
Hard to stop the momentum so
jumping off at the exit to explore inner landscapes
Fueled up with stardust, interplanetary waste-
the wisdom from a billion light years
I’ll fill this slipper and absorb the carbon, dated
but no expiration, strains of “Rocket Man” in my head
Its lonely out in space, but this is a voyage I take alone
Venus out my window is a distant sun
But there are many suns, some with multiple moons
Slivered moon is waxing crescent, negligible illumination
Thoughts run on silver Mercury
Hi L., This sounds like a midlife crisis, or menopause, going through negligible illumination and filled with interplanetary waste... wish it would move faster, so I don't have to go through it, if I have to go alone. L, this write is very dynamic and can have more meaning than just the obvious. Thank you for sharing...
"from the wisdom of a billion light years"....I'm always awestruck by the night skies
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on June 28, 2009
I love your mind, your heart. Your journey runs parallel with my own and the kinship feels strong and good. You are a gifted, skilled writer and I look forward to your posts.
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The captivating music of birds and the enchanting beauty of roses have, each in their own right, inspired people around the world for as long as anyone can remember. How the two combine with the challenges faced by a struggling writer in Georgia to c
Ron
I can relate, enjoyed this, Pierre
t r i p !! :) xOx Pea xOx
anita
EDWIN
In Spirit,
Bear
This is like dancing on the stars....
Lovely...
Embraced~Embrassé
Vickie
but no expiration, strains of “Rocket Man” in my head
Just a nicely written piece.
hugs
Fee
Georg
A celestial beauty, deep and penetrating, I love where you go with this and where you take me. Very fine writing indeed.
John
ET
energy by eating Mar's bars. Linda, next time you swing by this
way, wave. -gene.
I love the zany approach of this. It has many levels, all of them quite a ride.