Slam-dunk!! L o v e it! Were the subject not so depressing, I would be smiling over your canny use of metaphor -- peanut/shell bit brilliant --and the sly, oh-so-right ending. You'd see the sky light up! Thank you for
sharing this! 'Pea' <3
This book represents a thirty-day period of my poetry journal. Each poem addresses
the dominant thoughts occupying my mind during the early morning hours of a given
day.
Credit For The Write!
TRASK
sharing this! 'Pea' <3
Felix
Love Tinka