We were dining on natured delicacies discussing points of love and sexuality It’s a dichotomy she exclaimed, turning up her nose as the juice from a spoon-fed grapefruit took flight blinding my resolve
It is then I realized she may not have been as absurd as I once thought Yes, I replied I see the opposition. The yin yang of it all
I was rewarded with the slip of a button where cultured pearls no longer obstructed obsession and taste was given a new purpose with hand on face I painted her lips into a sensuous smile whispering, You are my dichotomy lets explore its meaning
Wow- I've been captured! YOu have a way with words dear Sir- Welcome! to AD.. I'm here now and then- I hope you STAy! - This line, (where cultured pearls no longer obstructed obsession
and taste was given a new purpose) I swoooooooooooned............
Onward and Upward from here, I feel it Mr.Poet! I smiled- I wondered and I felt drawn innnnn- YOur unique way of conveying your hearts desire, is Tremendous. Thank you 4 sharingggggg... Lady,Sheee *Sheila
Meaning-In Sense Of Climax When It's All Over,i.e. All It Was Anyway-It Felt (Addiction) Good-Ah Another Button_
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TRASK
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on June 2, 2005
I like the play with words, of course, that is what poetry, et al, is all about. But in this unique little offering I believe you passed the bar a bit. Good.
Welcome to the Den! I enjoyed this, it is intimate, fun,
slightly sarcastic and intriguing! It draws the reader
back in for several reads! Very Good Work!
First Edition Translation of Teselas by Carmen Crespo X111 César Simón Poetry Prixe 2016 Translated from Spanish by Robin Ouzman Hislop and Amparo Arrospíde
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and taste was given a new purpose) I swoooooooooooned............
Onward and Upward from here, I feel it Mr.Poet! I smiled- I wondered and I felt drawn innnnn- YOur unique way of conveying your hearts desire, is Tremendous. Thank you 4 sharingggggg... Lady,Sheee *Sheila
This is a jewel for the Major Art´s crown.
"Feeding The Addiction" is a page to enrich the book of
American Fine Letters.
Long Healthy Creative Life, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Love Tinka
Excellent! Thank You Your Comments!
TRASK
A charming, delightful debut. There is a sensual playfulness that invites the reader to explore hidden things--LOVE IT!
Welcome to Author's Den, you're among friends. :) I look forward to reading more of your words!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
"I painted her lips into a sensuous smile".. ..exceptional line!
Vesna*
ps ..give us more!!
slightly sarcastic and intriguing! It draws the reader
back in for several reads! Very Good Work!
Welcome to the den!
Eileen