I looked into a dream One of lost detail. Maybe just whispers or phantoms, When time slows to a blur
What I did see might seem insignificant. Linen decorated with a library, some cards and candles I saw it all through a tunnel where horizons color thought it was the eyes that took it all away the ones I’ve known for a thousand cycles of the moon. When destiny becomes a whitewash and lips liquefy resistance, while fingers sink beyond the stratum into the core of her. It is here I am found Translucent in slumber, opaque in the waking with morning tears sketching my pillow with tomorrows unknown
Outstanding imagery enriching contents of poetic beauty
"Walking the Illusion" of a dream. This is a flower from
the poetic garden to scent the mind of the readers.
This has some gorgeous lines in it:
"When destiny becomes a whitewash
and lips liquefy resistance"
Ha, you've captured it beautifully,
that abstract of emotion that
floods the senses. As I said above,
the whole poem is gorgeous and one
to be proud of!
This sings with a mellow mysticism and a wonderful musical rhythm in the irregular lines: loose jazz! This seems a scented write, somehow, and leaves the fragrance of the "waking dream"-like qualities you evoke so well. The imagery is unique and beautifully detailed and sketched: this has the sharp versus "smudged" definition of a water-colour painting you could look at for hours. Don't mind me: some days I am more lucid in my comments than others, but I hope you get the drift of something I have written here... And welcome! The natives are friendly! :)) TY Kate
From the author of Jupiter Remembered and Until It’s Time: Embracing Life In Our Later Years comes Petals of Love: Poetry of a Woman’s Soul – a heartfelt collection spanning more than thirty-five years. Through tender reflections, these poems offer g
Perhaps "..Quiet Storm" will help rekindle old flames buried and long forgotten or express the love so deeply locked inside of your soul longing to be released.
Regardless of where you may be found in love this beautiful masterpiece can be
Outstanding imagery enriching contents of poetic beauty
"Walking the Illusion" of a dream. This is a flower from
the poetic garden to scent the mind of the readers.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Enjoyed
William .....peace
"When destiny becomes a whitewash
and lips liquefy resistance"
Ha, you've captured it beautifully,
that abstract of emotion that
floods the senses. As I said above,
the whole poem is gorgeous and one
to be proud of!
It is here I am found.
Translucent in slumber,
opaque in the waking
with morning tears
sketching my pillow
with tomorrows
unknown
..OMG ..I love this last stanza..chills down my spine..superb!
vesna*
Great word pictures, brilliantly detailed, the last stanza is clever, and true.
Welcome to AD town..
Eileen