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Walking the Illusion
by Edward Lupinacci → (All Poetry by Edward Lupinacci)
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I looked into a dream
One of lost detail.
Maybe just whispers or phantoms,
When time slows to a blur

What I did see might seem insignificant.
Linen decorated with a library,
some cards and candles
I saw it all through a tunnel
where horizons color thought
it was the eyes that took it all away
the ones I’ve known
for a thousand cycles of the moon.
When destiny becomes a whitewash and lips liquefy resistance,
while fingers sink
beyond the stratum
into the core
of her.
It is here I am found
 Translucent in slumber,
opaque in the waking with morning tears
sketching my pillow
with tomorrows unknown   


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 Reviews of "Walking the Illusion"
Reviewed on June 9, 2005

Outstanding imagery enriching contents of poetic beauty
"Walking the Illusion" of a dream. This is a flower from
the poetic garden to scent the mind of the readers.


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU



Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on June 8, 2005
well Penned Walter
Enjoyed

William .....peace

Reviewed by Patricia Gomes
Reviewed on June 7, 2005
Walter, this is simple fabulous. A pleasure to read it first thing in my a.m. -- and a pleasure to have made your acquaintance.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on June 6, 2005
Very profound write. love the descriptions.

Reviewed by andrea coltman
Reviewed on June 6, 2005
Wonderful poem, Walter, the last stanza is fantastic...best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 5, 2005
If pillows could talk (or write), Walter. Thank you for sharing this offering. Well done. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on June 5, 2005
This has some gorgeous lines in it:
"When destiny becomes a whitewash
and lips liquefy resistance"
Ha, you've captured it beautifully,
that abstract of emotion that
floods the senses. As I said above,
the whole poem is gorgeous and one
to be proud of!

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on June 5, 2005
This sings with a mellow mysticism and a wonderful musical rhythm in the irregular lines: loose jazz! This seems a scented write, somehow, and leaves the fragrance of the "waking dream"-like qualities you evoke so well. The imagery is unique and beautifully detailed and sketched: this has the sharp versus "smudged" definition of a water-colour painting you could look at for hours. Don't mind me: some days I am more lucid in my comments than others, but I hope you get the drift of something I have written here... And welcome! The natives are friendly! :)) TY Kate

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 5, 2005
A truly marvelous poem, Walter.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 5, 2005
exceptionally well defined imagery ... great write ...

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on June 4, 2005

It is here I am found.
Translucent in slumber,
opaque in the waking
with morning tears
sketching my pillow
with tomorrows
unknown

..OMG ..I love this last stanza..chills down my spine..superb!


vesna*

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 4, 2005
You're swimming better than Mark Spitz.
Great word pictures, brilliantly detailed, the last stanza is clever, and true.
Welcome to AD town..

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on June 4, 2005
Reading your words is like swiming through molasses. Nice and slow and sweet to the tooth. Good.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 4, 2005
Beautfully expressed Walter!I love the last stanza!

Eileen

Reviewed by Dave Harm
Reviewed on June 4, 2005
Excellent write... living with dreams is a worthy goal, walking with illusions can be exciting...


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