Servile winds yield the spirit within taunted by obstructions Tempered with injustice Plagued by a body it no longer wants to serve
This body frozen in situation holds back what ethereal yearns It is now just a vessel of memories vacant of self being of desire
It knows days are just letters and numbers collected and pasted in a book waiting for the last page to be filled so a new one can be started
It asks; What is the stigma associated with turning to the last page? Some say it will ruin the story. Lessons will be passed A sin to the Great Author or having to learn them in the next edition
It just wants A New Story
Maybe one with Her in it
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Reviews of "Limitations of Beyond"
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on February 21, 2006
Read through twice...love it both times.
Well done.
Symbolistical esoteric surreal on reality of ontological eternity; and yet a clear revelation of the "I" changing places to reach final stage in TIME.
The contents and the art, poemization and the ingenious poetization of "Limitations of Beyond" gave me the assurance that this is a glowing page to add beauty and knowledge to the Holy History of Poetry.
Dark intriguing write.The poem matches the frightening art! Good to read you again;-)You've been missed!
Eileen
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 19, 2006
I would beware turning that last page, life and death needs a bit of mystery to it, otherwise we stagnate. If you turn that last page you will have lived for naught. Don'tdoit.
My book of poetry is being redone by me, I have a beautiful cover designed and the book will have a few more than 200 poems in it. I am going to have it printed on demand here in Canada. When it is done I will let you know when it is done and if anyo
A further collection of poems, many from years in the Middle East, but also the California San Francisco and Central Coast areas (Santa Cruz, Carmel, Big Sur, Berkeley, etc.).
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Well done.
Symbolistical esoteric surreal on reality of ontological eternity; and yet a clear revelation of the "I" changing places to reach final stage in TIME.
The contents and the art, poemization and the ingenious poetization of "Limitations of Beyond" gave me the assurance that this is a glowing page to add beauty and knowledge to the Holy History of Poetry.
I salute You, Poet!
In reverent gratidude,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi Ben-YEHU
Eileen