Too Long (poem) by Janet P Caldwell on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Ronald Segroves (Reader)

Reviewed on February 1, 2010

It has been too long. I'm home now.
Would love to hear from you. RDS

Reviewed by Masood Lohar

Reviewed on January 2, 2006

Very nice poem. :-)

Reviewed by Randall Barfield

Reviewed on August 16, 2005

Maybe you could tell what it was he should forgive. Cheers.

Reviewed by Bob Holt (Reader)

Reviewed on July 26, 2005

Good one. I've done this too many times. I wish I had a dollar for every time I wanted to turn back the clock.

Bob H

Reviewed by Hanley Harding (Reader)

Reviewed on July 18, 2005

Dear Janet -- Janny;

I hope you get your happiness -- seems I've lost mine...

Stop by the RT and say hello... we've all missed you.

Doc

Reviewed by Tamara McGregor (Reader)

Reviewed on July 18, 2005

Missing you.... These memories are so hard to deal with, but there is always hope, especially in our heavenly places.

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on July 18, 2005

wistful, loving, you captured it all here jan

Reviewed by Ian Thorpe

Reviewed on July 18, 2005

My darling,
You have almost as many memories as I do.
Wish they were all as sweet as this for you.
loveya,
Ian

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on July 17, 2005

perhaps home will he come
anything is possible when love is involved

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on July 17, 2005

good one

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on July 17, 2005

Romantic Sad Write-Love Is Never Truly Mutual Whence Based On Love,i.e.

True Love Is Compassion-Does He She Have That Compassion To Show Give To Only You For You!?

I Always Said: Your True Love May Not Be Of Or In This Physical World!

TRASK

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on July 17, 2005

There is no denying the strong emotive tones in this poetic composition. Thank you for sharing it, Janny. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on July 17, 2005

I feel the yearning in this poem of love passed by, but never forgotten. One hopes it can be rekindled and come to fruition!
Keep the faith Janny! Blessings to you!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by C. J. Stevens

Reviewed on July 17, 2005

A beautiful, moving poem; eloquent in its simplicity, joyful in its melancholy.
C.J.

Reviewed by Robin Labenberg

Reviewed on July 17, 2005

Janny,
Very touching poem..If you love him and he loves you then stop wasting time..Love can be wrapped in circumstance but TIME is no man's..Both are gifts anyway you look at it!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 17, 2005

Beautiful poem although filled with melancholy!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Tracey Hardie

Reviewed on July 17, 2005

Felt the longing in this write.... :)

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 17, 2005

a very effective poetic expression of emotion ...

Reviewed by Sandra Mushi

Reviewed on July 17, 2005

Beautiful write, Janny! Full of passion and longing.

God bless,

Sandie.