Reminds me of the confection by Meltis - Newbury Fruits... do you have them Stateside?! Tangy jelly(o) with a sweet liquid capsule locked inside... They were my Mother's favourite... I wonder why??... she WAS quite a sauce box!! :)) And this girl looks about as handy with a gun as I would be with a whip... Gotta luv this, Sage... it is just so pert and cheeky - and, if line-dancing is involved, count me in!! :)) This warms me up nicely for non-stop Samba and Sangria in Margarita in a few weeks... Reckon I shall get to learn how to hug a cactus there, too...
The photo of the very supine saguaro goes very well with this poem. I get the image of a strong woman with a soft inner core.
Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)
Reviewed on January 23, 2006
Sage,..Peter has said what I have been meaning to ,...trying too.
there is a creative Brilliance to your work and Courage beyond the adverage. You seem to have a powerful GOOD strength and you create
special poems and writing from your courageous heart and I want to thank you for taking the time to really process my work with your
wisdom and I haven't let you know just how much you have moved me with your strength,....Be blessed with holy Goodness and love and peace to you',
Rich Criso
Very creative and explicit write Sage
You treat us to a stark and intense study of the essence of a woman
Your boldness and imagination takes you places, other artists would be
afraid to venture !
Peter
Reviewed by Only A Poet (Reader)
Reviewed on January 23, 2006
such intensity in your poetry, well penned as always.
When the powers-that-be make the decision to return a selfish party-girl, Zara, to Earth on three missions of redemption, can romance and mayhem be far behind? One hot and trendy gay nightclub, two bickering angels and three unlikely pairs add up to
During the 1960's a young soldier struggles with basic training, a bully sergeant and his own inner demons. A tale of struggle, redemption and survival.
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Eileen
Uniquely penned, lovingly created, you describe inner woman brilliantly! Slighly tangy, definately zesty...and yes, delightful!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
there is a creative Brilliance to your work and Courage beyond the adverage. You seem to have a powerful GOOD strength and you create
special poems and writing from your courageous heart and I want to thank you for taking the time to really process my work with your
wisdom and I haven't let you know just how much you have moved me with your strength,....Be blessed with holy Goodness and love and peace to you',
Rich Criso
You treat us to a stark and intense study of the essence of a woman
Your boldness and imagination takes you places, other artists would be
afraid to venture !
Peter
Love Suzie xox :-)
'you know she
runs through
your veins'