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Smoke on the Water: Sacajawea Dives!
by Sage Sweetwater → (All Poetry by Sage Sweetwater)
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Shoshone, her wife
Otter Woman, Sacajawea
dives, her name means "boat pusher,"
fur for fur trader, rocks Otter Woman's
little woman in a boat, just look at "its"
elongated shape...
smoke on the water!

not wrapped in
waterproof packaging,
Sacajawea and Otter Woman
take a tributary to Beaverhead River
unlike any Shoshone oral tradition, to get
to the mountains where their womankind live,

capsized pleasure, Otter Woman
spills...Sacajawea dives to retrieve
valuable stories and instruments which
floated out of Otter Woman's boat...smoke
on the water!

met up with guide
Old Toby, but they
had already been through
the mountains,
they go down
to Nez Perce country, resume Beaverhead
travel, recorded in the diaries because of the
significance of womanly expedition,

Sacajawea and Otter Woman
return to the Dakotas, the age-old
homophobic rifles echo, she rocks Otter
Woman's little woman in a boat, smoke
on the water, Sacajawea dives!...

~circa 1805


Copyright 2006 Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist, brainchild of Sage Sweetwater Creative Properties, flagship of Stone Creek Woman


   

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 Reviews of "Smoke on the Water: Sacajawea Dives!"
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on November 24, 2006
beautiful!

Reviewed by Thomas Garrett
Reviewed on October 7, 2006
As a history teacher, your unique approach certainly would keep students on the edges of their seats.

Sonny G

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 7, 2006
your double-entendre excells in this poem ... keep rocking and diving ;)

Reviewed by Aberjhani
Reviewed on October 7, 2006
Did anyone ever imagine lessons in history and geography could be so blazingly erotically sumptuous? I didn't. The SMOKE ON THE WATERS of these lines heat up and expand many preconceived notions about little women in their boats, and lives, as witnessed by history and themselves.
Aberjhani

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 7, 2006
What fun I am having today, a new day enjoying delcious thoughts. Thanks for this exciting write!

Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
Reviewed on October 7, 2006
AD is so straight laced these days I just don't think I dare say anything ;-)
Enjoyed this a lot, it made me smile.Actually you have such a way with a double entendre I'm sure you are part English.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on October 6, 2006
Watch that "smoking on the water" or you may end up losted...;) ed

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 6, 2006
Your poems always exhibit a great deal of knowledge and thus teach the reader. Thank you, Sage. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 6, 2006
You are smoking with this write Sage, and it isn't on water;-)
"Love that song"!

Eileen


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