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Grizzly Falls Buried Badger Creek
by Sage Sweetwater → (All Poetry by Sage Sweetwater)
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Sage Sweetwater, unrivaled, bringing you the Upper Tier in lesbian erotica...Sage Sweetwater, the exceptional ARTIST of literary lesbian poetic prose...

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Grizzly Falls Buried Badger Creek

clawmarks in
the tree bark, dug
out a scratch mark, filled
it with a puddle of urine, the
grizzly leaves its calling card,

she hands me
back the crock, her
wrists rope-burned from
where I found her tied to a
pecan-wood schoolhouse chair,
whiskey put a burning lump in my
throat,

on the slateboard
I wrote, "fat wagon
wheel spokes transport 
this free woman to Grizzly
Falls" -  choking back my tears,

she spotted
a pine-pitch stump,
we tore into it with the
vengeance of an ax, started
a fire, the crock got her talking,
"you came through that schoolhouse
door like a grizzly leaves its calling card" -

"I found your
horse two and a
half days ago at Badger
Creek, in the water's flow,
your saddlebags, a note you
wrote, 'to my wife'" - horses sometimes
get stolen and women sometimes get tied,
roped into it,

choosing
the grizzly over
the badger, though
we know that if we had
not grown, her tied to that
schoolhouse chair, the badger
would not be there, or the blue topaz
fire in her eyes,

habitable land,
free land of the mind,
1890 we f***ed at Grizzly
Falls where by extension,
adventure, and enlargement
in literature, the arts, the life of
the mind, and pussy, Grizzly
Falls buried Badger Creek,

dug out
a scratch mark,
filled it with a puddle
of urine, the grizzly leaves
its calling card,

I...


Copyright 7/12/08 Ms. Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist
 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Grizzly Falls Buried Badger Creek"
Reviewed on September 29, 2009
"claw marks in the tree bark dug out a scratch mark, filled it with a puddle of urine." Very rustic descriptive. This describes the Bear before you actually introduce it. I picture tall grass in a wooded opening to a meadow that is marked as he enters or leaves. Knowing Bears have about a 100 mile radius, your story infers, in my perception, to the seasons the Bear follows it's life through. Thanks for the camp fire coffee. Tim

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
Reviewed on July 20, 2008
Excellent!

Chrissy

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on July 17, 2008
This is so powerful! I love how adamantly you declare the strength of women!

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
Reviewed on July 17, 2008
wow...passionate and graphic, the imagery was searing.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on July 16, 2008
Fantastic imagery from the details, from the adventure and always the freedom that your characters always seek and fight for. Love the rewards they get also. amazing. Liz

Reviewed by KJ McPhee
Reviewed on July 16, 2008
You're so good at specifics, sage; not just a chair, but a 'pecan-wood schoolhouse chair', not just fire but 'blue topaz fire' in her eyes. So elemental, like Jack London and the call of the wild. You're nature in the raw, sage, and a diamond poet, too.

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
Reviewed on July 15, 2008
another great adventure, Ms.Sage you get more than i do!! if i wore a cowboy hat do you think i'd get to saddle up more often? creative and compelling writing.

Reviewed on July 15, 2008
So good to be free! Wonderful storytelling skills, vivid imagery and mellow nostalgic mood once again Sage.

Reviewed on July 14, 2008
Sage, I am glad you set her free from them ropes that bound her to torment, for yes her eyes would have lost the topaz fire in her eyes perishing in such a place of emotional bondage...
Fantastic Write & I Loved The Entire Feel Of The Write.
Much Love & Happiness Poetess Of Lesbian Sensual Erotica :)
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman
Reviewed on July 14, 2008
wish i understood a bit more about badgers and bears, the chair image is a strong one, an emotional story flows in contrast to this tied image - like how the poem expands, 'if we had not grown..' learning moves out of the classroom, poem sees and smells the Wood for the Trees, beyond the Woods, 'habitable land, the free land of the mind'....so the tied image becomes also part of meditations imagery - liked this about it, ho-hums, and a big om - eyes sparkle with tears and fire, this is good read Sage-san, and bear's pee pee in a poem is an absolute first! Original Sage, with love, Nicky xxx

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on July 13, 2008
Yes, I agree with Karen V. (that word, though)

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on July 13, 2008
raw, passionate, wonderful!

Reviewed on July 13, 2008
Few can write with such power, to instantly take the fortunate reader to where you are - you are that kind of writer, Sage, and it is a pleasure to read you. Thank you! Well done. And that music is GORGEOUS!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 12, 2008
Sometimes I wish I could just "be" in one of your poems, Sage; just to experience the "happening." I hope you know what I mean. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on July 12, 2008
You write a few words and the images just pop up and they stay with the reader. A style that is very distinctive Sage!

Axilea

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on July 12, 2008
This is strong, rich painting, evocative and lasting.
John

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on July 12, 2008
Sage, unrivaled is the perfect word for it. -gene.


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