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Confession
by Sage Sweetwater → (All Poetry by Sage Sweetwater)
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Rare butterfly perched
atop church steeple,
Sunday service soars
with diversity's pattern

~<>~ 

Stained glass holds its
value in colorized worship
where nature's fig leaves
drop their cover revealing
naked honesty

~<>~

Pulpit is worth
its oak weight in
the heaviness of
deception, lightened
by confession


Copyright 11/18/2009 Ms. Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist


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Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on November 25, 2009
Confession: "Do unto others as you would have others do unto you:
remains the only religion I need or want.
Thanks for the crusade, Sage.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on November 21, 2009
I married a Catholic and my children were raised Catholic...the whole nine yards. Now they question how you can sin, confess, be obsolved and go back to keep repeating the sins.Your words hit home tonight.
Blessings and love,
Susan

Reviewed on November 20, 2009
this is beautiful Sage
especially being naked in honesty...
Peace, Love & Inspirations
Vickie

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on November 19, 2009
Great write, Sage
Love,
Deborah

Reviewed by Robert Jude(Ace) Forese
Reviewed on November 19, 2009
if the church confessed its deceptions, would it be forgiven by the People? ...

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on November 19, 2009
I've always thought that 'confession' was over rated. Another fine write.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed on November 19, 2009
Sage,

Grew up Catholic. Got saved in '75. Have become kind of skeptical about Man's translations of what God intended - still believe, but don't go to church much anymore: full of hypocrites. And that's sad. You capture it spot on in excellent (revealing?) lines - indeed. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on November 19, 2009
Sage, I try not to be too political or religious. You have touched some subjects lately that have stirred my passions. I left the catholic religion many years ago, (1971) when they would not marry me because my husband (at the time) was Baptist. I became a Lutheran when my children were born, so that they could learn about religion and be baptized...Now I follow many modalities. I can say without a doubt, I can relate deeply with this poem...Very well written and received by this ex catholic..
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on November 19, 2009
wow is right, what a powerhouse of writing!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 19, 2009
Wow! Sage, you have really been on a roll the last week it seems. Taking on religion for the most part, but giving us a hodgepodge of poetry and articles and stories to mull and mull again. Jeez! The first verse sets up the rest of the poem quite nicely, giving the reader a beautiful "first" glance at what many are taught to see the Church as, a beautiful, spiritual affair although it's hides a desperate theology inside it beautiful stained-glass windows. Oh! Oh again! That middle stanza is perfectly written and all too revealing (pun intended) . . . Whoops! That last verse is taking to the limit man's fantasies they attempt to steamroll over the rest of the world.

Reviewed on November 19, 2009
Excellent poem, Sage; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D


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