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The Linseed Oil Gasped
by Sage Sweetwater → (All Poetry by Sage Sweetwater)
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The crow's
talon scribed
a decipherable
glyph on the windowsill,
but I won't tell, where my hard
apple cider rested, I was out in
vagina high crested wheat grass,
my pants just a few feet away inside
draped over my easel, I am this century's
firebrand artist, I had them there for the canvas
to absorb the crotch,

I stood bare,
my hands on
each side parting
my vulva guiding the
warm golden stream the
color of winter crested wheat
grass #162 Zinc Buff Yellow, I
dropped to my dimpled knees to
sniff,

my olfactory
memorized DNA,
the vulva scratched
into a rock face at Abri Cellier
in the upper Paleolithic period, the
clay triangle representing the vulva
embellished with an eye worn as an
amulet, would you wear my vulva around
your neck?

I climbed
back in my
studio window,
sat down on my
stool in front of the
mirror leaning against
my easel, and painted
my vulva #724 Dianthus
Pink the perfect scent of
the crotch of my pants mixed
with a golden stream warming the
crested wheat grass #162 Zinc Buff
Yellow on the palette, the linseed oil gasped...


Copyright 12/1/2009 Ms. Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist

 

 

 

 

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 Reviews of "The Linseed Oil Gasped"
Reviewed by Kay P Devenish
Reviewed on June 11, 2012
Well...at least you were not too pink.I am not a lesbian but my vagina and I and all other parts of me thought your poem painted a perfet picture.Indeed..it was just fine!Straight can appreciate a good work of art too!

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on December 2, 2009
awesome descriptions, my hat is off to you!

Reviewed on December 1, 2009
If the oil didn't blush, I did. Incredible describtives as always Sage.

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on December 1, 2009
Will this be auctioned at Sotheby's in 50 years time?

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on December 1, 2009
Is this the nearest one can get to self-fellatio, Sage? Unless you're extremely loose-limbed and double-jointed! :)) After I initially pushed my eyeballs back into their sockets and got my brain round this, I found it extremely soothing. Like a good mug of cocoa. YOU are the ultimate artist. You take me with words where few brushes ever have. THIS I can see, feel, smell and begin to understand. Makes me feel kind of luscious and wolverine. Keep on pushin that envelope, Darlin. Shock is only an initial response to that to which the mind is unaccustomed. We should all get to know ourselves better and love ourselves more. xx

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on December 1, 2009
Me thinks the Linseed Oil blushed a tinge of Allizuran Crimson...for sure!
Elegant artist's at work......wonderful!
Blessings and love,
Susan

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on December 1, 2009
Aw shit. Just when I think you can't rattle my brain cells you always manage to do it, don't know why I lull myself to sleep when it comes to YOUR written word, or in this case the pouring yellow essence from your innards. Taking on Whistler's Mother and stripping the bitch bareass in this, yet one more chapter in the magic and pure unadulterated genius which comes from you whole being. Is the world really ready for Sage, or is it quivering 'neath the comfort blanket of "respectability" to reach out and embrace this woman who is probably many light years ahead of her time?

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on December 1, 2009
Sage, You and Victoria are more into this then I am, symbolism...ETC
I'm trying.
Love,
DeB

Reviewed on December 1, 2009
Marking of a territory
The tall wheat grass is glorious
a field of gold bounties
And the beauty of your nudity can only capture
Our thoughts to see what you paint…
...and then...More vividly as your artistry strokes your pants!
WOW! What a canvas idea! Incredibly Hot
I then grin as I also can see “The Linseed Oil Gasped”
Woman=Bold & Outspoken & Totally in Charge!
Peace, Love & Inspirations
Vickie

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on December 1, 2009
Sage at easel and painting as few others can. Such creation!

John

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman
Reviewed on December 1, 2009
wow - first off i see the Impressionists all looking up from dab dab dabbing and remarking on your bold strokes Sage - an in-your-face read :) female sexuality, her creative energy, a self portrait, the artist at work. Beautiful colours. Pants - there's a clever way reported by women around the coffee growing parts of the world, of filtering coffee a certain way to get the one that they want :) Pre paper filters, very ecological!) Lots of love to you Sage xx


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