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Avatar: Godspell Reversed
by Sage Sweetwater → (All Poetry by Sage Sweetwater)
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unturned water
into wine, grapes
shrivel, waterwheel
spins backward, Amish
bonnet caught on the hook,
her fishing reel stalls, bottle
opener comes from her creel,
pilsner uncapped, unturned Psalm,
she writes a lesbian sonnet,

she remembers
her grandmother's
Whitman Sampler,
Old Order stitched in
needlepoint, undoes
her blouse, Avatar,
Godspell reversed,
there was another
woman coming here,
what it was they were
to do was unrehearsed,

modesty turned
into wild passion,
pussy drunk on pilsner
bottle caps tossed in the
bushel basket, sun rays tanning
parts unturning comformity in laps
celebrating middle age, and why would
God care that in May, blue crabs shed their
shells at an astonishing rate; some things are
attributed to the moon, when honey crystallizes,
there is something you can do to bring it back to its
original syrupy state, Avatar, my love, Godspell reversed...
 

Copyright 4.22.2010 Ms. Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist

 


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 Reviews of "Avatar: Godspell Reversed"
Reviewed on April 23, 2010
Interesting and creative, as only Sage could do justice to the words!!
Love this indeed!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Michael Guy
Reviewed on April 23, 2010
Great writing; I enjoyed this immensely! And I wonder as a writer how do you think and create such lines as this? "and why would
God care that in May, blue crabs shed their
shells at an astonishing rate; some things are
attributed to the moon," So apropos to spring...
best, michael

Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
Reviewed on April 23, 2010
I can feel the turning. You are a true wordsmith Sage.
Dayvid

Reviewed on April 23, 2010
I made a pilsner wind chime
an eye sore to some...but buzzin on brew pops
creativity moves me
and here I think they have rehersed
if only in their minds
gentle each button revealing pleasure
(where am I?) making sure before I mention
that birth suit dipping invitation again...
Love Moving Water & Buttons Vickie

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on April 23, 2010
incredibly real, i can see her and because of your way with words, i can feel her

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on April 22, 2010
Sage, How do you write your poetry like this? Very ingenious!
Always,
Deborah


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