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Andalusian Jesus
by Sage Sweetwater → (All Poetry by Sage Sweetwater)
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 Andalusian Jesus

two thousand
pounds of Christ
horseflesh pulling
a convert wagon, hames
strong tanned to match Jesus'
copper skin, Andalusian Jesus
pulling alone, a ton of thorns pulled
from lesbian flesh scarred with premeditated
sin of the churchman, master of the Christian
puppets, diseased messiah, history repeats itself,
it all went wrong,

a whipcord of
a woman at the
reins, her biceps
tattooed, Cross drips
in blood spilling into the
Sea of Bronze, King Solomon
adored her at the reins, he fed
Andalusian Jesus Seven grains,
that was then, this is now, religious
alliances better chosen, mistook militia
for the peaceful dove of rosary beads,

picking up
her first customer,
whipcord of a woman
pulls back on the reins,
Andalusian Jesus' long
white fur covering his hooves
blushes, woman climbs in, tits
spilling out of her white tank top
slashed and stained, that kiss fired
whipcord woman to dump those thorns,
red light coming into view, thighs parted,
Andalusian Jesus'  trained eye pulled lust
to the canvas door of whipcord woman's revival
tent, the cries changed lives, falling onto each other,
their wanton eyes widened to clear a path for the Bible,

whipcord of a woman
made her way through the
crowd, passing through the
church doors, she leaned in
straining to be heard through
the chaos "Do you see how it is?
This is our home. And we're here,"
Andalusian Jesus pulled a New Way.


Copyright 4.24.2010 Ms. Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist

Director Wendy Crouse DreamReal Pictures http://www.dreamrealpictures.com bringing you the Jett Durango Film and many other Films by Celebrity Lesbian Firebrand Sage Sweetwater 


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 Reviews of "Andalusian Jesus"
Reviewed by Joyce White
Reviewed on September 28, 2010
You amaze me with your gift of words. Check out my offering of Art Making with the Muses, www.Authorsden.com/joycewhite. You might enjoy. Love, Joyce

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 24, 2010
As always, your unique style and straightforward and honest expression are most engaging, Sage. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on April 24, 2010
You know I love this! Independent thought, not spoon fed doctrine! I LOVE IT!!!

Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
Reviewed on April 24, 2010
Yeah...tantalizing words.
Dayvid

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
Reviewed on April 24, 2010
'That was then, this is now'.....'Andalusian Jesus pulled a New Way'... so very well done!! You are the imagery master Dear Sage: whipcord of a woman made her way!!

Love the way the words fall on the page... each sentence a little longer to entice the next on to be fuller, greater, more potent than the previous! Yes, as said, you are the Imagery Master!
Blessed Be Beautiful Sage!!
xox :-D



Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on April 24, 2010
Spanishbred counterpart to Clydesdale and the metaphor of moving, going west in the soul, claiming the land but claiming more the attitude, the changing values and imposing them, too, and educating, enlightening...bringing the 'message'

it's all here, Sage, and you are a shining light of difference.

John

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 24, 2010
Very vibrant and lots to think about in this one...religion and Jesus moved in different circles then and now but not sure they are any better...
fee


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