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Transition
by Sage Sweetwater → (All Poetry by Sage Sweetwater)
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When alchemy fucks the metaphor!

Blacksmith's fiery horseshoe Ʊ
Mare's owner's thighs run with liquid gold
U at the Y.

Copyright 5.22.2010 Ms. Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist


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 Reviews of "Transition"
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on May 22, 2010
fantastic!!

Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
Reviewed on May 22, 2010
This is awesome! Succinct and tantalizing. Love the horseshoe visual.Bellows blowing the hot fire at the Y.

Peace and firm anvils,
Dayvid

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 22, 2010
definately brands a striking image...
fee

Reviewed on May 22, 2010
Some could take this as a piss on them inuendo
Or a golden shower fetish...but I see
Marking territories...U & I
I love the firery visual of the branding iron
Hang one of those horseshoes for me to catch the magic
Some call that luck...
Wearing insignia's scented badge
Vickie

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on May 22, 2010
Yes, I see this, Sage! Fab. visual and subtle conjure of mind.

John

Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)
Reviewed on May 21, 2010
ummm..little tough for me to undestand this transistion...


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