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Sulfur: Clash of Domination
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Sulfur: Clash of Domination

the smell
of a good burn
strikes bearing a
literal resemblance
to cleansing the exhausted
copper veins, alchemical elevation
of the soul at 9600 feet,

the air is thin,
oxygen scarce,

the match slow to strike,
even slower to burn,
the flame in this
altitude profane,

culminating the
gunpowder plot,
metaphorically
exploding a direct
order,

flames of
contention
lick the arcane,

predisposition
raised to an art
form, enigmatic,
combustible, and
at that moment, on
the edge of defying
a request, clash of
domination.


© Ms. Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist


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 Reviews of "Sulfur: Clash of Domination"
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on June 17, 2010
... like lighting a match against the stubble of Clint Eastwood's chin... the gauntlet has been thrown down and the magic as yet concealed beneath the poncho is bound to win... The Good, The Bad, The Ugly fighting it out over A Few Oil Dollars More. xx

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on June 17, 2010
Outstanding writing.

GOD BLESS YOU
Tony

Reviewed by Don Juan Amante
Reviewed on June 17, 2010
great heights, labored breath! brilliant Ms. Sage.

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on June 17, 2010
...this is not only theft of fire from the gods without the heavy morality of consequent punishment - thankfully! - but Sage igniting a declaration at altitude, taking 'them' on... and I luv this Sage

John

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on June 16, 2010
Remember, remember the 5th of November!

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on June 16, 2010
In the end, the elements all do their part because they must. Patrick

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on June 16, 2010
Full of insight ~
Namaste,
Christine

Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
Reviewed on June 16, 2010
I love the smell of a slow lighting match at high altitude. SULFUR! The arid tuft of smoke wafting slowly heavenward into the nostrils of the gods.

Peace and higher altitudes,
Dayvid


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