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Not God's Giant Eggbeater
by Sage Sweetwater → (All Poetry by Sage Sweetwater)
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forecasting
the peak of a
flash, we were
born from the power
of an event, not God's
giant eggbeater, sun shines
on the globe and it doesn't revolve
around myth, it revolves around science
and Evolution,

the microburst,
upside-down tornado
spreads out from all directions,
column of air behaves like pancake
batter poured onto a hot griddle, not God's
giant eggbeater,

lightning
strike, the
drama lies
within, attach
a wire to a kite
frame when it is
lightning and see
if God saves your ass.


Copyright Ms. Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist


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 Reviews of "Not God's Giant Eggbeater"
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on September 13, 2010
Sage, your writing always impresses me. You stir with a giant eggbeater the imaginations of all your devoted readers. On this one I will say I respect and will defend your right to express your perspective and belief on the subject. However I will also have to say that my personal views are congruent with Tony Nerone's perspective on this issue. May love and peace be always withyou my dear friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed by The Poetess
Reviewed on September 13, 2010
I honor your view here, although I may not agree with it. My experiences have shown me that God/Love is reached through the Heart that mind and science does not seem to comprehend.

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on September 13, 2010
On target. You're in good hands, Sage. Yours. -gene.

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on September 13, 2010
:D That's it; just a big grin!

Reviewed on September 13, 2010
so testy . dinner and breakfast. First, no dessert and now this. If, there are angels is there a higher being? I don't have the answer to that maybe you do but, when you a assume you make an ass out of you and me both.

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on September 12, 2010
God made an egg
Then he made a chicken
To resolve that orderly conundrum
He gave us finger lickin'

Patrick

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on September 12, 2010
i like this-yes, science and math make the world make sense, writing, art, music - they give it beauty

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on September 12, 2010
M Theory visited by the unique Sage.
Yes!

John

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on September 12, 2010
I think GOD would save your butt, Sage. I like you so I bet he does too.

Namaste
TONY

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 12, 2010
well, god does not save forest fires from engulfing entire territories so i can kiss my ass good-bye ,,,

Reviewed by Micki Peluso
Reviewed on September 12, 2010
attach
a wire to a kite
frame when it is
lightning and see
if God saves your ass.

I have done just that and worse and yes God saved more than my ass.

Micki


Reviewed by Ragno Donna
Reviewed on September 12, 2010
I doubt it, no one saves your ass but you!

Cool poetry, Sage.

Ciao,
Ragno Donna


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