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Little Girl's Shoelaces
by Sage Sweetwater → (All Poetry by Sage Sweetwater)
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Little girl's shoelaces
Length longer than she needs
Butterfly wing bows to soar her big woman Dreams

Copyright Ms. Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist


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 Reviews of "Little Girl's Shoelaces"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 15, 2011
Great imagery and symbolism that stirs thought and emotion, Sage. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Micki Peluso
Reviewed on January 13, 2011
Sage, this is some sort of Haiku? Whatever the form it's delightfully written. I love it

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on January 11, 2011
Delicate, sweet, and oh so innocent...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on January 11, 2011
As sweet as your very name, Sage... very subtle metaphoric insight.

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on January 11, 2011
Disarmingly sweet, playful and full of hope.
Be well,
Christine

Reviewed by The Poetess
Reviewed on January 11, 2011
This is an awesome display of words.

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on January 11, 2011
Sage, Very original.
Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by Chip Bergeron
Reviewed on January 11, 2011
A lot said in a very few words. It's nice when a picture can be painted with such economy, and so beautiful...

Chip Bergeron

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 11, 2011
I like this one a lot Sage, so much to dream on in it.
fee

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on January 11, 2011
Wonderful, Sage. Wonderfully Sage. Love, gene.

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on January 11, 2011
This reminds me of my daughter when she was a little Girl. Excellent writing as always, Sage.

Peace and Love
Tony

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on January 11, 2011
Very sweet. I always tripped over my big bows, then I was always tripping in college. Aspirational coincidence? Patrick

Reviewed on January 11, 2011
that is the sweetest thing ever! Morgan

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on January 11, 2011
and may her dreams come true...

cheers,
dan

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on January 11, 2011
I can see her, lovely, free innocent!


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