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Wonderful Metaphors

by Debashish Haar — Read all 156 poems by Debashish Haar

Thursday, April 6, 2006

Shopping malls are wonderful metaphors


which grow like bacteria, or unwanted hair,


almost anywhere.


They’ve galleries of greeting cards, hosiers displaying shapely figures,
electronic gadgets obsolete in the West,
food joints serving pasta that taste
of rubber, bakers and confectioners display
mouthwatering cookies and chocolates
insuring medical insurance companies,
music stores compete hard for collections,
pharmacies selling prescription drugs
without any document. 

There are some, who grow like adverbs,
and some who have trainers,
and some who have nothing to eat.
There was a small market,
now replaced by a huge restroom,
where most of the shops sold
handicrafts, candles and lampshades.
They were unable to pay their taxes.
The Municipal Corporation generates
some revenue from the public toilet.
They charge 50 paisa for a piss.



Copyright ©2006, Debashish Haar
 

 
 
 



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Reviewed by Duke LaRance
Reviewed on June 3, 2006
The only time I ever went to the mall when my shrink's office was there -- how's that for commercialism!!!

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on April 12, 2006
Very clever!!:)

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on April 11, 2006
This has the feel of something longer, a short short maybe, attention to detail is strong and leaves the reader wanting to look further into the scene.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on April 8, 2006
Perfect ending! Great write.

Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth
Reviewed on April 7, 2006
I can hear the cynicism in this. This is harshly critical of the lack of art and the importance we around the world place on things that don't mean a thing. This is a wake up call! Write on!

Reviewed by Joyce Hale
Reviewed on April 7, 2006
A tribute to a scourge of our *modern* living. I love the *Mom-and-Pop* stores which were abundant while growing up, the corner candy stores and bakeries with owners who knew everyone. Excellent write, Debashish.

Peace.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 6, 2006
the shopping mall is powerful metaphor for greed and materialism ... excellent sarcasm to this wasteful reality ... luv how you end it ...

Reviewed by Aberjhani
Reviewed on April 6, 2006
Highly original and entertaining perspective with some serious jabs of satire thrown in for definitive measure. Even more, it makes one wonder about the condition of the reality represented by the metaphor of the shopping mall. It seems scary things can come in glittery packages.
Aberjhani

Reviewed by Candy T (Reader)
Reviewed on April 6, 2006
we're a fickle race, humans. the irony is laughable, the reality can knock you on your ass if you're actually awake. i hate to admit it, but in the spirit of transparency, i must ... i do so love to shop :(

btw, excellent cynicism here, ty


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