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Under a Lamplight

by Debashish Haar — Read all 156 poems by Debashish Haar

Monday, January 22, 2007

Waiting ten years under a lamplight
her youth slowly slipped away,
when he returned she’d turned gray.
She recalls the moment, the delight,

when he smiled at her on the way
to the university library, he thought
she was someone else; it brought
two strangers--an affair, a few days--

something that seemed like love;
she loved him, if that’s the word,
thinking him other than what he was.

Mistaken all the while, from the curl of
first smile; there’s no exchange of words--
eyes pierce each other, sleeves brush.

(if crowded there’s an occasional touch)


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Reviewed by Joyce Hale
Reviewed on January 29, 2007
A poignant write, Deb - beautiful, sad, mistaken.... A touching write. Well done.

Peace. Joyce

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on January 26, 2007
You master captured emotions in this one. And stirred the readers imagination, and thoughts. Whether real or a scenerio you did an outstanding job in this one. Ending left for contine is Poet Chose to.

Light & peace,
Joselyn

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on January 24, 2007
Debs....am reading you after ages...but my friend, its always a joy to read your thought provoking writes....cheers...love n luck....BHUWAN!!!

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on January 24, 2007
i agree there is an intense feeling thatcomes along with this
rushes blood into the heart

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on January 24, 2007
So sad for anyone to wait "Under a Lamplight" for very long. Life, let alone youth, should never be allowed to slip away.

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on January 23, 2007
Shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!! :)) Intense and penetrating, Debs. Within that shared bright circle of light on a desk and within the sound of turning pages... there is such a restrained passion, book-fuelled. Love this. TY K xx

PS Think I recall a message recently, but doesn't show up on my Message Board here? Sorry not to have replied when I first got notice of it... now I can't find it...!!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 23, 2007
i like this change in style and approach ... well told, Debs ...

Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)
Reviewed on January 22, 2007
Never forgetting those little touches piercing eyes,
Well done
Michael

Reviewed on January 22, 2007
Debs this is so poignant and heart touching. A different style than ususal. I really love this poem. It's very real and emotive.

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on January 22, 2007
Always a pleasure to see you Debs..I have missed your wonderful works~~

Peace & Light, JoAnne


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