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This Moment

by Debashish Haar — Read all 156 poems by Debashish Haar

Wednesday, March 28, 2007

This moment’s an allegory,
which nobody knows,
no one understands.
It stammers and rattles,
and speaks everything at once.

A risk to read its writing:
the helices, loops and vanishing ink.
Not certain that it’s itself,
no one else, not another moment.

This moment’s a metaphor,
growing like thirst in a desert,
like noise in a mega-city,
like hydrocarbon emissions,
like the population,
like the prologue of this story.

It’s warmer than midday air,
colder than water,
faster than a shooting star,
gentler than a zephyr.

This moment's an allegory;
It stammers and rattles,
and speaks everything at once.

Copyright©2005, Debashish Haar, All rights reserved


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Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 30, 2007
to speak at once or to write haltingly, confusedly, or unclearly relays the allegorical essence of this poem into a coherent direction and perspective ...

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on March 29, 2007
Wonderful concept here, Debs. Love the repetitions as the mind seeks to get a handle on the smooth spherical surface of the idea of it, and the details you have chosen to illustrate readily illustrate the diversity and randomness of the stammering, rattling and "everything"-ness about it! :)) TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 29, 2007
A moment of joy to read you....thanks for sharing!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on March 28, 2007
"

It’s warmer than midday air,

colder than water,

faster than a shooting star,

gentler than a zephyr.



"Moment" This is something that is incredibly important to me. We spend much of our lives running in circles, rushing from place to place. It can be harmful and hurtful to ourselves and those around us because when we do not create a "Moment in time" we eventually reach a place in which we are less thoughtful, less feeling and less aware of what is happening around us. "Moments in time" are those occasions in which we are able to push aside the concerns of daily life and focus on ourselves, friends, family and the inner spirituality that connects us.



I think that it is fair to say that we have all had some "Moments in time." Very Powerful Analogy in this poem.

Your creative craft and mind at work capturing a moment before it is gone and making it singular in time.



Peace,

Josie

Reviewed by Bill Grimes Jr.
Reviewed on March 28, 2007
Wonderful poem!

Bill

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on March 28, 2007
Yes Debs tis true

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on March 28, 2007
i like this

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 28, 2007
This moment's an allegory;
It stammers and rattles,
and speaks everything at once.

And it's quite powerful, Debashish.

Reviewed on March 28, 2007
Your poetry always stirs my heart and echos in my mind, you say what we cannot speak clearly of, and you do it so very well. Outstanding Debs.

Reindeer


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