it would seem her honey is not sweet enough to appease his sadness ...
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on May 5, 2007
In this, short and yet profound observation of human lives you capture two unique views and emotions of life. The perception is outstanding the busy bees hive offers a small warning of split infinity. Well captured and scribed Poet Debashish!
So refreshing to read you again, Debs... and what confidence to drop by with 21 words! All meaningful and none wasted. Very concrete, and a paradox to the title. The fancy footwork of bees can perhaps become very tiring for the beekeeper whose whistle wanes after having whistled long into a dappled wind. An impressionistic response, but there you go! :)) Wrote recently on the Language of Stone - reminds me somehow of my thoughts on the "inference of marble"... I'm very fond of your bee/honey writes... TY Kate xx
Blessings,
Joselyn
Happy to read you again...
With love,
Susan
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Chanti
Great write!