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Amorphous

by Debashish Haar — Read all 156 poems by Debashish Haar

Thursday, May 3, 2007

All those shapes
that she assumes
in the language shadow

melt and gather
in a beehive

where his grief
deserts her.

Copyright © 2007, Debashish Haar, All Rights Reserved
 



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Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 6, 2007
it would seem her honey is not sweet enough to appease his sadness ...

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on May 5, 2007
In this, short and yet profound observation of human lives you capture two unique views and emotions of life. The perception is outstanding the busy bees hive offers a small warning of split infinity. Well captured and scribed Poet Debashish!

Blessings,
Joselyn

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 4, 2007
Great imagery..
Happy to read you again...

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on May 4, 2007
I keep reading this over and over...wonderful imagery!
With love,
Susan

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on May 4, 2007
A refreshing and profound write...wonderful imagery within. Enjoyed this very much. Penned well!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on May 3, 2007
Excellent little number you have penned, Debs; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on May 3, 2007
So refreshing to read you again, Debs... and what confidence to drop by with 21 words! All meaningful and none wasted. Very concrete, and a paradox to the title. The fancy footwork of bees can perhaps become very tiring for the beekeeper whose whistle wanes after having whistled long into a dappled wind. An impressionistic response, but there you go! :)) Wrote recently on the Language of Stone - reminds me somehow of my thoughts on the "inference of marble"... I'm very fond of your bee/honey writes... TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on May 3, 2007
Those first few lines are intriguing. The last, enigmatic. Meaning will be ascribed subjectively by the reader. A good write!
Chanti

Reviewed by William DeVault
Reviewed on May 3, 2007
there is something profound and fun here...I must think...I must think...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on May 3, 2007
It is amazing how unaware we can be when we are so aware.......

Great write!


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