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The Old Fashioned Girl
by Marguerite T Lemoine → (All Poetry by Marguerite T Lemoine)
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In Reminiscence of the past, I came up with this idea of how it was like in days long gone, never again to return


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THE  OLD  FASHIONED  GIRL


She was nought but an old fashioned girl
Doing what she ought
with ringlets about a beautiful face
And she was never, never in haste
Her busom was tight and
perfectly light
Her skirt was full length over
her high buttoned shoes
She walked with a swing
Boys would give her a ring
She never said yes, but
the boys would fill with desire
She was waiting for Mr Right
Finally he came with his
hair all slicked down
He gave her a whirl and
at dances they would twirl
He gave her delight
So she married the guy
with the slicked down hair
who made her promises big
He turned out to be a pig
He gave her a ring
and babies to boot
And kept her at home
Safe from all suiters, you see


'lil flowers 


 


 


 


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 Reviews of "The Old Fashioned Girl"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 15, 2007
Women have always been abused and it's a terrible indictment on this planet. You make good points with your words. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on June 15, 2007
Margurite, This is wonderful the flow and poetic imagery was perfect.
Thank you,
Josie

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on June 4, 2007
Marguerite,

You surely are adept at placing a defining perspective on a common malady!

Love&Hugs, Sister Hope your daughter is doing well..
Rhonda

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 19, 2007
Ditto Elizabeth!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 19, 2007
That is a story repeated over and over. You've given it new insight.

Well done.

Elizabeth

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 19, 2007
Yes unfortunately the good old days weren't always so good for the women as history would have us believe. This is a good example of that.

Fee

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on May 19, 2007
I grew up in the twenties and thirties and gals had changed by then.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 19, 2007
That picture has inspired many a poem on The Poet's Nest and here on AD lately, and yours is a very good one, Marguerite! In my poem based on this picture, she got her revenge, and became a pirate!

Reviewed by Marguerite Lemoine
Reviewed on May 19, 2007
And so it 'twas--How about you? Do you remember when--before World War One and Two ha ha ha of course not--you only heard stories


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