the next breath (poem) by Josephine M Bohen on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)

Reviewed on June 5, 2003

Yes, yes, yes! Very well done, intelligently written! Fine work here!

Reviewed by Melissa Rives

Reviewed on May 22, 2003

Most excellent!!!!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 21, 2003

this is inticing... melts with reason...

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on May 21, 2003

shaking my head...Josie, I like you

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 21, 2003

This was great! I liked what you had to say here Josie!!

Reviewed by Mom

Reviewed on May 21, 2003

What can I say? It was very well written. Love Mom

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on May 21, 2003

Josie excellantly said!!!!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on May 21, 2003

Best thing you could ever have said!!

Reviewed by Patricia Gomes

Reviewed on May 21, 2003

What you DID write is a poem
with a wisdom and a built-in mantra. I salute you.

Reviewed by Larry Skahill

Reviewed on May 21, 2003

I was going to write a long, clever review, but I didn't

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on May 21, 2003

VEry very good write...I am with u...love n luck...BHUWAN

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on May 21, 2003

I do.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

you know what's important Josie, good for you!

Reviewed by Nancy D.

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

Well done, I live for today, tomorrow may be gone.

Nancy

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

It doesn't get much better than this...it seems you have written all what you wanted for it all came out in this write...your heart wrote all that was needed right now
Amor

Reviewed by Rodney Bohen

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

Josefina,
The words you pen this day are weighty indeed!
True lass, the next breath and wink of eye, are gift indeed! So, may we inhale in wisdom, then exhale in life lived. Good piece,.... strong, important,... things that need to be said! And yep, you did it in Josie signature style, distinct, and all your own. Oh! Didnt you know lass, fresh individual style, is a rare thing among mankind this day! Especialy when wonder, grace and depth accompany the same said pen, as in your case for sure! I applaud your talent depth and heart... I bow in retreat and thanks
Sincerely,
Rodney Evan Bohen

there are no guarantees for the next
friggin
breath
so all the rest of that stuff
is just going to have to wait
I�ll go down in history tomorrow
for now
I say
live it

Reviewed by m w

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

Right Now is all we have. Its with each right now that our life unfolds before us.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

This was great! I loved what you had to say here!

Reindeer

Reviewed by a- maryllis

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

This is good Josie.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

hahahahahahaha...you bet. Live it or die without it. Bravo.

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

right as usual. very well written

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

good write, josie! well done! love, and (((HUGS))), your friend, karen lynn. :)

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

(((josie)))

"because right now
all i can think about
this second is
that
life is friggin short
and you best be happy where you are
because
there are no guarantees for the next
friggin
breath
so all the rest of that stuff
is just going to have to wait
i'll go down in history tomorrow
for now
i say
live it"

my favorite part!

well done, josie, i agree with you...

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla.

"tomorrow tomorrow
i'll love ya tomorrow
tomorrow's only a day away" LOL

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on May 20, 2003

Josie, very good. I agree with you.