fate (poem) by Josephine M Bohen on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Dale Brabb (Reader)

Reviewed on May 25, 2003

When I look back on my own life I find it quite humorous to think I ever had any control...nicely done!!

Dale

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on May 24, 2003

Fate is the true trickster :-)

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on May 24, 2003

U know I liked this one as one of your best.

Reviewed by Rodney Bohen

Reviewed on May 24, 2003

Jose,
I fear I almost pasted the entire piece! Good piece, mysterious, fleeing, good..alive...yes alive, thats the word!
I have especially enjoyed your pieces of recent, they seem to breathe a new sort of wondous new, like a child exhaling in excited fashion and form, anyway good right, always a pleasure to read your heart unfolding...in freshness
Sincerely,
Rodney Evan Bohen

and I am breathless with anticipation
for life unfolding
for what it will be
for what it has been
and I know now
that

it is all out of my hands
that I control not one thing
that I can�t make anything be
that the moments of my life
are fleeting at best
are rapid at least
so many thoughts swirling
feelings emotions
as I turn over the reins
to

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 24, 2003

You wrote on life's most important lesson, to know who is in control~ excellent Josie, if you can believe it;-)

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on May 24, 2003

5-24-03

Learn To Love(Compassion) Thyself 1st,Then All Others; You Don't Need Worry About (Faith) Fate!

TRASK

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 24, 2003

(((josie))) one of your best...AWESOME *clapping* ((((HUGS)))) and love, karla. we may not know what the future holds...but it will be fun learning what happens! :)

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on May 24, 2003

Josie this one is so awesome
Peggy

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on May 24, 2003

Ah, but fate can be so kind if you have a structured format to work from. Love it.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on May 24, 2003

This was so beautiful and heart-felt, I loved this poem,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 24, 2003

very good write, josie! check out amor's poem; you'll love it! i sure did! :) (((HUGS))) and love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :)

Reviewed by Cynthia Pagliolo (Reader)

Reviewed on May 24, 2003

Beautiful write, the soul lets it all out.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 24, 2003

Hold on tight.....and go check out Amors page......happy landings!!!

Love
tinka

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on May 24, 2003

Josephine, sometimes I wonder if you realize how much talent lies inside of you. No matter what you write about, the powerful of the spoken word as presented by you rises up and slaps me in the face. You have a magnificient talent ... You do not write enough. There are so many ideas inside your mind ... and great poetic ideas they are. Waiting for more of them with hungry anticipation. Bill

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on May 24, 2003

It is not so much fate but destiny that does guide us into tomorrows fold. Beautiful work, Josefina.
Amor