Take me along to the places you've gone when my eyes looked away.
Tell me the song that you sing in the trees in the dawning.
'Across the Fields' by 10000 Maniacs
Whispers in the Wind
Shhhhh...
Listen, my love...
Can you hear the silence call you Can you feel the words surround as wind carries your soft reply filling the quiet with your sound and whispers in gentle breeze
Hush, my love...
Feel the security of nature's embrace sense the touch of her tenderness the warmth of sweetest smile and lips that caress you with Zephyr's kiss to calm your deepest fears
Lie still, my love...
Listen...feel,
Taste the taunting memories savor the precious moments stolen longings to be quenched drink from the oceans of your dreams and the passion of life's feast.
In the calm, my love
Listen...feel... and taste
Look into your heavy heart see the goodness that lies within as life transforms emotion's cell to promise and tender embrace with love's reflection mirrored in your soul
Be at peace in love's sensual journey...
Absorb the wonder of silent serenity Grow in the subtlety of innner strength Relish the endless possibilities Welcome life's inexplicable gifts
One of the reasons I read and enjoy poetry so much is that sometimes I read a poem that makes me feel things, not just on an intellectual level, but on a visceral one as well. What strikes me is that I have had this reaction to so many of your poems. "Whispers In The Wind" is another perfect example. I swear the hair is standing up on the back of my neck! I have been swept away to a place I never want to leave. The beauty of your words,the form and flow of the poem alone make it -yes, another masterpiece. But my own feelings which are brought forth by experiencing this piece are so intimate and powerful, I just want to stay here and live in it. Yes, I can hear those whispers in the wind. They have enchanted me and have taken me away to a special place I can't even begin to describe, but yearn to explore. ~Butch
So calmingly beautiful - I was immediately taken in; is if it had been written explicitly for me - that denotes the mark of superb writer - to effortlessly take the reader into and through the journey. -- Jeff
As sensitive and beguiling as the comforting breeze on a heat-stroked land... the tone is so gentle and yet the sentiments and passion positively SHOUT!! Like a poetic caress of fingers to a lover's cheek, the tenderness is palpable. You are always such an effortless and accomplished writer, Taylor. Soft as silk; tactile like velvet. I FEEL this. Bless you and TY K xx
Ahhh, Taylor, this is so soft, gentle and flowing. This is what romantic poetry is all about. Elegant. Lovely. Lovely, indeed.
My warmest regards and respect,
CJ
The first time I read this, I wasn't ready to reply... wanted to cry for no apparent reason. After this second absorption of your remarkable tender and compelling lines, I find that it takes me back to parts of a love I'm hesitant to visit. And, now that I know this, I want you to hear from me: These words will live, for they will reach the heart of the reader, as they did mine. Thank you.
- Bill
I do indeed drink and savor this cup frequently. The problem with dreams is that no one else shares them with you.
Well ... maybe an occasional person does.
The symbiotic relationship between the dreamer and the one who ingests the dreamers dream is a gulf that most are not willing to cross over.
Most yearn for something that life, seemingly, has deprived them of. The fixation on what is yearned for, but never realized, becomes the muse for the deprived to mull and extrapolate from.
I have seen that no one is really satisfied. Everyone has something that is unrequited in their lives ... something they can't seem to attain or savor.
This is an extraordinary piece of work from your pen, Taylor! Definitely one of your best in my opinion....Love these lines 'Absorb the wonder of silent serenity
Grow in the subtlety of innner strength'
Beautiful!!
As ever Taylor you express such heartfelt sentiments so eloquently. There is so much power in your pen. This is so moving I was mesmerised and it's saved. Hope the schedule is calming a little now. Enjoyed this very much my friend. Love & hugs, Panda :)
Welcome back Taylor of the eloquent word! This mesmerizing flow of flawless beauty permeates the heart and soul with lavish love.
So good to read you again!
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Regis
so beautifully presented
Thanks for sharing
Love & Peace
William
My warmest regards and respect,
CJ
- Bill
I do indeed drink and savor this cup frequently. The problem with dreams is that no one else shares them with you.
Well ... maybe an occasional person does.
The symbiotic relationship between the dreamer and the one who ingests the dreamers dream is a gulf that most are not willing to cross over.
Most yearn for something that life, seemingly, has deprived them of. The fixation on what is yearned for, but never realized, becomes the muse for the deprived to mull and extrapolate from.
I have seen that no one is really satisfied. Everyone has something that is unrequited in their lives ... something they can't seem to attain or savor.
You write about these things with deep abandon.
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Beauty and sublimity mingle with wonders in "Whispers In The Wind"... art flows and a message of creation is delivered.
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
There is great inner strength in these sublime words, which clearly
illustrates your soul connection with the divine...
Magnificent poetry...
Don't work too hard, make quality time for yourself..
Love and Peace
Peter
Grow in the subtlety of innner strength
Relish the endless possibilities
Welcome life's inexplicable gifts"
Wonderful poetry, Taylor!
Grow in the subtlety of innner strength'
Beautiful!!
Love, Myrna
Love Tinka
So good to read you again!
Love,
Eileen
Been a while girl. Where ya been?
Love,
Susan
beautiful, beautiful poetry!
Susan
Woven with nature, love and well expressed emotions...... Beautiful
"
Can you hear my whispers
in the wind..."
Peace,
Joselyn