Taylor, to write haiku that brings alliteration and cadence together like this is simply artistry. Thank you for sharing your gift; and encouraging me to write as well.
Peaceful wishes (of you in the arms of one you love). Fergus
This is an outstanding Haiku Taylor! Your capacity for creating the scene and feelings of intense passion with perfectly chosen words makes this piece so very seductive. So much is conveyed here with so few words. The photo of the moon serves to enhance the poem beautifully. I'm impressed with your ability to use this form so effectively!
~Butch
Nice nice nice...you know I have a love/hate relationship with haiku but this beautiful work leans me toward the loving side of the fence... splendid work, Taylor!!
hugs,
Myrna
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on November 10, 2006
The sea mistress is seductive, spec' to islanders..
I love this "Sepia" Moon overlooking the ocean pict. So mesmerizing! Well well written Haiku,and felt!
I've never tried my hand at these, many *( like you) are excellent at creating them so elequently!
YOu're Art is in your words and it is always in amazing ways!
PEACE! and LIGHT! WArm HuGs,Sheeeoxxo
~Stanza/haiku 2 is plum gorgeous... Can relate to these in every shape and form... nature's allure is like no other. Mind and soul expanding write that puts us in touch with more than hormones that affect us! Gossamer and soothing. TY K xx
The picture you penned in sepia gives my visual one of memories long ago. The music of a saxaphone, somewhere in the diatance ,adds a romatic yearing to the whole picture. This is totally passionate T.
Love,
Susan
Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)
Reviewed on November 10, 2006
Taylor, when you produce work in this style it never fails to amaze me just how much you capture in every, single line and always hitting the mark spot on. Superb sensual Haiku collection ...bravo. Missed you too my friend. Much love, Panda :)
You bring us beauty in words about a rare thing of beauty. These make up a rare presentation of our moon's amazing presence and effect on our lives and environment. Thanks much. - Bill
Peaceful wishes (of you in the arms of one you love). Fergus
"Tidal Seduction(Haiku)?"
A seductively enjoyable read, given a peaceful glow and serenity.
Lush in poetic imageries~I adored this read, thank you!
Sincerely,
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm
~Butch
Regis
hugs,
Myrna
I like :)
I've never tried my hand at these, many *( like you) are excellent at creating them so elequently!
YOu're Art is in your words and it is always in amazing ways!
PEACE! and LIGHT! WArm HuGs,Sheeeoxxo
Love,
Eileen
Love Tinka
Love,
CJ
Love,
Susan