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al dente
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anyone have a toothpick?

 



al dente



This poem itches me
with the grit of mint leaves
to the tooth
a prickle like the tag of my collar
rubbing,
             rubbing
a fundus
twitch finger
bud of fetus
half bite, half saffron thread tickle

a sky's bemused shout
from a forgotten open door
somewhere behind me and coiled above
a ceaseless boom only I can hear

Within, I wait
for a time more congenial
As I wait for the myrtles,
their magenta lava seething
captive still in trunks
twisted like horn

I wait,
my seventh pass round
these duties
almost done, nearly done
though my hand wonders
                          dumb  
heavy with its chore
as a tiny insect
prisoner
in the amber
of my ring
writhes
comes to life
                         trembles.










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 Reviews of "al dente"
Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on May 24, 2006
I'm curious . . . what was it you were cooking here?

You Patiliyah, as always, astound me with your insights and your ability to enchant amd mesmerize. Turning the mundane into art, and suffering into light flowing eastward in washes of inspiration.

Keep Writing
Respectfully
Richard

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on May 17, 2006
Thank you for introducing me to the word 'Fundus' whatever it is lol. It does not detract from this excellent piece love the use of assonance and your style.

Paul;-)


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