Bottomed Out (poem) by Ronald W. Hull on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 23, 2004

Describes my situations well!
Good poem, no Brilliant poem!
Catch ya later!
Becca

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2004

Last line is a killer.....Gotta luv it!

Sometimes I write that way too (most times lol) But it's just that writing......sometimes, that is....:op

Really like this one Ron......ty, Dani

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on June 13, 2004

Ok, Ronald, you already know I'm gonna love the perfectly done rhythm and rhyme.. and it's flawless! But it takes a theme to make that poetic cleverness bounce: you've got it! Yes, I read your preface but that didn't stop the poem from being universally recognized. Haven't we all been there? I think the lively, staccato 'beat' kept the theme from bogging down. You have a great 'ear' for rhyme. katy xox.

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)

Reviewed on June 11, 2004

lololo.

nice one

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on June 9, 2004

coined nicely
kinda looks like my truck sorta
enjoyed

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on June 9, 2004

A very clever write here, Ronald, that interweaves the expression of despondancy in a "plodding" (with the use of the heavy glottal stop "in"-endings) style, but with the additional "wink" of the upbeat optimism at the end! Reminds me of Forrest Gump! So true that the only way from here on it is up! Good write, much enjoyed. Thank you for your helpful comment on "Funny Bones" - I do believe you are right as I do find it difficult not to overcomplicate even simple ideas! Thank you. Kate

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)

Reviewed on June 7, 2004

This is cooool, flows well, has a country feel to it, and I can appreciate the feelings, I think we all have felt this way before- I like also how it ends on a positive note.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 6, 2004

powerful perspective ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 6, 2004

Great poem Ronald, good pic too!;-)
We should be free to write whatever
comes to mind, not always about ourselves;-)

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on June 6, 2004

Excellent Ron, felt this one!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 6, 2004

Nice write, Ron! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D