Wonderful message in this poem, Ronald!
It has a great beat to it! I found
myself putting a melody to it;-)
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on June 13, 2004
I read the last cuplet and the word "catchy" popped out.. Yes, Ron, I said it aloud! It also has a few layers and, if one lingers an extra second or two, an array of thoughtful messages... metaphores gallore. I can't tell if this came all at once or developed over time... who cares? It caused me pause and that's a good thing. Good stuff! katy xox.
Mary Angela Nangini's poems celebrate the richness of life and love. From the city to cottage-country and the roads in between, Nangini explores the changing seasons of her varied region. (This book will soon be reprinted in hard cover.)
“The woman or man who is a poet, or fiction writer, or playwright, or all of these, is engaged constantly in a jazz ballet of vocabularies, passions, genders, histories, perspectives, death, love, and life. The music of revelation announces itself to
Love ya!
Jane
You got the point.
very powerful too! We should
all enjoy LIFE! I do declare not enough
of us do this.
Becca
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
Strong message!!!
Enjoyed...
Trixie :)
Love tinka
It has a great beat to it! I found
myself putting a melody to it;-)