This is magnificent, Ron. Wonderful write.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on July 10, 2005
Ron, as we have all said since childhood, I'm entitled to my opinion and my opinion is that this magnificent poem is your best! Once read in its entirety, I went back and slowly savored single lines, even a word here, one there, like "liquidity."
By the time I reached that last verse, that last line, I could feel my skin goosebumpy... this is a flawless, layered piece. WOW! katy xox
If you tend to believe romantic, passionate, masculine poetry is a thing of past eras, read "She Intrigues Me," and be swept away in the beautiful craft of a contemporary poet of love.
Using Calgary as a backdrop the author satirizes the self-serving nature of the public as it continues to fatten itself, not only physically, but egotistically as well.
God bless,
Sandie.
Safi
Love the pic too!
Love,
Eileen
Clinical and incisive analysis
Peter
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Love Tinka
Take care,
Sherry
By the time I reached that last verse, that last line, I could feel my skin goosebumpy... this is a flawless, layered piece. WOW! katy xox