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Without a Flaw
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My fascination with nonsense continues…


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Without a flaw, the world would yaw,
and capsize on its inflection.

Without a flaw, your perfect jaw,
would jut in the wrong direction.

Without a flaw, the sea would saw,
and cut through superstition.

To be at awe, through thick and thaw,
is thy predilection.

The flaw is real. It's like a keel,
on a ship of its own disruption.

So if perchance, you're flawed at dance,
enter the competition.

Quick on the draw, with pen strokes raw,
a dice for the right diction.

There oughta be a law against a flaw,
in common sense perception.

But law is law and flaw is flaw,
once married become perfection.

Copyright 2009 © Ronald W. Hull

8/15/09

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 Reviews of "Without a Flaw"
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on August 22, 2009
Ron, your last line is the killer line elite - that puts linear thinkers into a real tizzy, and I love it -- what symmetry? -- you have certainly attained a new plateau of original thinking with your last several works -- I find them most entertaining and always thought provoking -- please keep them coming our way -- peace and love -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on August 18, 2009
Just the photograph brings a longing for hope and your words bring "common sense" to light...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Reviewed on August 17, 2009
I think my mind is flawed :-)

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 16, 2009
flawed by this one, Ron ;)

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on August 16, 2009
Very nice. Flaws make life exciting. And law is often flawed. Or, in the words of justice Holmes, "This is a court of law, not a court of justice."

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on August 16, 2009
very well said and done, be it the flaws that make us strive to be better. LadyJ

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 16, 2009
Like the rhyme and beat


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