I've had many colds like you describe but I would never have thought to write a poem about it. I guess you never miss a chance to turn even a bad cold into something positive like this good poem. - Vic
Now that's talent! I loved this and your ability to turn a head cold into wonderful poetry is amazing and wonderful. So glad I found your work!
Peace,
Ellen
Good write, Ron! Just got over a cold myself, think I am trying to get another one; ARRRGGH!! love, your friend, Karen Lynn. (((hugs))) :) *FEEL BETTER SOON!*
Hahaha, oh my, don't mean to laugh at you Ron, but with you!! I had just read my piece (I wonder how many people have written about a cold...?) called, "Cold's Clutch" earlier today, deciding between it and "Waitress Nightmare" to post, Nightmare won out, damn, hate to flood my poems but you all remind of things I've written...god, I hate the feelings in my head when sick, thanks for the memory!
Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
Reviewed on November 3, 2002
I'm coming down with a cold myself. Find it hard to write in this state.
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on November 3, 2002
A common malady with which we all can identify, that no one escape no matter how hard they try. Bill
Peace,
Ellen