Lost on the Journey (poem) by Karen C Vanderlaan on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 26, 2007

21-THE LIGHT INSIDE IS GRADUAL-THE BRIGHTER IT BECOMES ALLOWS FOR NEW FINDINGS IN WHAT WAS PREVIOUSLY THOUGHT OF AS DARK- {evol=love} - Ted

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on June 9, 2007

A loss is always heartfelt and drains one emotionally. Some how you need to find the strenght to go on and do the best you can.. When my little two year old grandson died , I felt I couldn't go on .. I wrote a poem called ,, 'Living life for you. ".. Each day i tried to do something good for some one in his name . It helped me a lot.. I have written the story of Joshua on my den.. It might help if you read it.. God bless and thank you for your encouragement....M

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on June 9, 2007

I hear ya!!
exceptional piece..thankyou Karen!

vesna

Reviewed by Art Hernandez

Reviewed on June 9, 2007

Losing someone is a sad reality that many of us struggle with, and more so when they have followed or walked beside us for the majority of our lives. The visible pain within your thoughts and words is one that we as readers can only feel from reading. We hope you continue with the love and peace of our prayers and the touch of Light from the One who we all meet when this physical journey here is over.

Love peace and our prayers to you....

Art Sun...

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on June 7, 2007

This font is so tiny Lady K!
I read it and I loved it still~
I just wanted you to know how tiny tiny it is, to be read by others...
Hang IN!
As time goes along steadily~~!
STay Strong!
BE SAFE!
Warmest Blessings and Love, WArrior Spirit Lady Sheeeoox
God Bless!

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on May 27, 2007

wow
great emotions
steady pace as times moves on
great write

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on May 23, 2007

I agree with what Ed has said.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 23, 2007

So very sad, Karen. But I think we all often get lost on life's journey, and sometimes it takes quite awhile to find the right path again.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on May 23, 2007

..but all steps lead to somewhere, all roads a destination I will find, when the clouds part I will in rapture breathe
her heaven song of light

Fee