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On Second Thought
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On Second Thought

 

We love “catch phrases”,

They sound so good and wise.

But sometimes when given second thought,

The wise words just don’t ring so true .

 

Like, “Don’t sweat the small stuff, and its all small.”

I beg to differ on this-for if the things in life that truly matter,

Are all treated as insignificant and trite,

Then no one will care about or rise to action,

To be the change that will better our world.

 

Then the phrase, “Don’t look back”,

Seems sage and good but on second glance,

I know my past has value and worth,

And in looking back I surely find,

Warmth and happy and sad and truth,

In the learning that has come along the way.

 

And folks sure love to throw this one around,

That happiness is not found in wealth.

But let me tell you a simple truth,

As one who has experienced poverty,

That having enough wealth,

Surely makes for less stress and strife on life’s journey.

 

And here is one, I do truly love,

And I do so love wise quotes,

“If you want to see a miracle, be the miracle”

Now that makes sense to me!


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 Reviews of "On Second Thought"
Reviewed on August 15, 2008
Hello Dear Karen,

Well written and very timely. Let's all take long second looks at what really counts in life. Thanks for sharing.

Cynthia

Reviewed by Todd-Michael St. Pierre (Reader)
Reviewed on August 15, 2008
I Love it... Karen... !!!

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on August 13, 2008
Lovely and lovingly expressed. The whole thing. Thanks for sharing it.

Reviewed on August 12, 2008
great making sense verse Karen, here's one I have always had a problem with, "honor thy mother & father," I feel that this is wise to do but it should be left up to the individual that was dropped in the toilet by the mother or the ones who had dead beat fathers who never lifted a finger to do anything, hugs

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on August 12, 2008
Oh so true, one must always take time
for 'Second Thought' Great piece!

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on August 11, 2008
a wonderful piece Karen,
Most enjoyable reading
Love & peace

William

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on August 11, 2008
These are some marvelous points of wisdom. The one about "money can't buy happiness" had to be authored by a person with plenty of money. Our societital way of life is built on the process of bartering with money--meaning food, clothing, housing, transportation, etc. and I think money buys a whole lot of happiness just by supplying us with those needs. Anyway, you've penned some great provoking throughts in your poem.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 10, 2008
“If you want to see a miracle, be the miracle”
Now that makes sense to me!

Fine words, Karen; and your whole poem expresses a lot of truths. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on August 9, 2008
Karen, it's great how you have taken some of the catcch phrases and added your own perspective. Nicely done.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 9, 2008
If you want to see a miracle, be the miracle

Words we can all truly learn from.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on August 8, 2008
I love this one Karen as you lay it RIGHT on every line, Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 8, 2008
Enjoyed this one with such wise myths challenged like the words so carelessly tossed around. It is easy for example for people to tell you not to worry when they do not even know what you worry most about.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 8, 2008
Right on all counts Karen! The thing is not to get caught up in trite sayings 's,because they aren't meant to live by,they are just off-handed remarks that may suffice just for the moment!Wise poem!...ET

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on August 8, 2008
cliche's certainly give one to ponder,,, creative write.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 8, 2008
We all have it in our power to bring happiness to someone else.

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on August 8, 2008
You said the right words. I don't like to not reminiscence about the past. I love to go back to my past and relate to the good things. As for wealth, I have enough to get me through as of now.
About miricles, I've witnessed people getting healed of their diseases with many prayers. God can do miracles, not us. I believe that to be true. Angels can help us and save us though I believe.

Reviewed on August 8, 2008
Clever way to knock down all of those cliches we hear so often but never really think about. Excellent write.

Mary

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on August 8, 2008
giving 2nd thought is wisdom, for each being has its own unique perception...i like this one:

"Don't hurry, don't worry. You're only here for a short visit. So be sure to stop and smell the flowers." - Walter Hagen

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on August 8, 2008
Hi Karen,catchphrases doesn't always ring truth and you have shown that in this poem that there is truth if we look for it ourselves and inside of our souls.Wisedom and knowledge are what you have which explains the poem that you wrote,I enjoy reading it.take care

Edwin


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