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Don't Walk Away Now
by Barbara Kasey Smith → (All Poetry by Barbara Kasey Smith)
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You can "go" fly away like a beautiful white dove...

Don't walk away leaving me in this frame of mind
tease me with the warmth of your arms one more time.
Hold on to me for an hour or maybe even two
I need to absorb a broken promise you're about to do.

Don't you want to hold on to what we once had
why do you need to walk away leaving me sad?
Forget about your tomorrows and hold me tight
press your chest close to me for one more night.

Chorus:

You can "go" fly away like a beautiful white dove,
go seek the woman that you think you love.
Let me feel our love one more time in my heart,
before you leave me and your son and depart.
I won't beg you back or ask you to change your mind,
when you walk away, I'll know you're one of a kind.

I hate to see you walk away with "no" goodbyes,
we promised to be together until the day we die.
How can you shut the door and walk away,
leaving my heart and soul in such a disarray.

Our little boy will be sad, forlorn, and hurt too,
why not say goodbye to him as you should do?
I'll not ask you to stay where you feel "no" love,
you can "go" fly away like a beautfiul white dove.

Chorus:

How can you walk right out our door,
without letting me feel your love once more.
Allow reality to soak into my mind and soul,
then you'll be free to set out for you new goal.

Repeat Chorus




 

 


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 Reviews of "Don't Walk Away Now"
Reviewed by Horrace Foster
Reviewed on June 10, 2008
I like your work as I read it I feel that I can finish every word with you. I love to write but I am not much a reader, but I will be after tonight.

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on June 6, 2008
This made me cry, these two lines "I need to absorb a broken promise you're about to do." and "Our little boy will be sad, forlorn, and hurt too"

Reviewed by Darryn Murphy
Reviewed on June 1, 2008
this is cool - I love it

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on June 1, 2008
Barbara
this is one of the most beautiful writes
I've had the Pleasure to read
Thanks for sharing all these wonderful thoughts
Love & peace Be with you

William

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on June 1, 2008
...with beauty you pen in story...sadness...breaking music of the heart...love...and family. ...instrumental wisdom...that touches ones heart...hears the sadness in notes you so wonderfully penned.
excellent Barbara...
John


Reviewed on June 1, 2008
So sad and heartwrenching. It actually made me cry.
Excellent write.

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on June 1, 2008
Well done Barbara. The poem song creates a story and takes the reader there. Another song writer is born.....M

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on May 31, 2008
Barbara Love this lyrics
Your perfectly chosen words capture such
Beautiful visual
I can even hear the music to this lyrics
Its a very sad song but very real to true life!
Brilliant write!
Peace Love and light...and hugesss too...Morning star

Reviewed by Harmony Blyth (Reader)
Reviewed on May 30, 2008
This is a really beautiful poem... sad but beautiful.

I thought it was well written.


Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on May 30, 2008
WOW! The river of your talents runs deep dear Barbara. Lilting rhythmically and it would lend itself to a genre of country ballads quite nicely. Good work!
Richard

Reviewed on May 30, 2008
Barbara A moving song it is a tear jerker
WOW
thei needs to sung and recorded
sincerely
Tuchy

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 30, 2008
Definitely has a Country-Western flavor, Barbara!

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on May 30, 2008
Very moving and heartfelt song, makes me want to give you a hug.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on May 29, 2008
Splendid song Barbara....sweetly composed...God Bless

Allen

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on May 29, 2008
A beautiful, moving song. Great work. God blesss. JMW

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on May 29, 2008
Beautiful Barbara. Simply beautiful. Nice job.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on May 29, 2008
Oh my,how beautiful ..well done sweet lady...have a wonderful evening..Hugsssssssss

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on May 29, 2008
This is a song that should be sung,,,, great job.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on May 29, 2008
Bitter sweet in this potent love poem of love gone sour. All you need is a banjo and a guitar and Reba to sing this and you have a hit Country Western song.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on May 29, 2008
This is beautiful Barbara and I can hear it being sung. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 29, 2008
Barbara,you are soaring with this gem! I'd love to hear it with music! Beautifully done!

Love,
ET

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on May 29, 2008
Barbara, you are very talented. I can just imagine your song put to music. I bet it would be beautiful. Great write.

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on May 29, 2008
Absolutely beautiful song you have written and sung, for I could hear it as I was reading it. Well done my friend, well done. Love, Bonnie


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