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Fog
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Poetry by Liana Margiva

The fog descended upon Earth

Soaked up compassion for the poor heart

And with compassion he did take in passion

Wild passion that had promise of the bliss


And radiated joy. It called itself the Love.

Bewitched the poor heart, seduced with paradise.

And in the end it fought the futile fight

With musty apathy 


And soon, the battle lost, it caved in to defeat

And drowned the heart in ocean of despair.

The fog descended upon Earth,

It kept the loyalty to heart

Just for one sigh of bliss that it provoked.


And grateful, it deprived the heart of cheerless love.

The wind embraced the trees and branches broke

In tribute to departed love,

The gentle leaves all shook in fright and feared for life.


In fog’s tight embrace the Love did contemplate:

Was I so foolish to depart from heart I settled in for good?

The fog ascended high with Love in arms

And stars in heaven moved aside in awe.

Love recognized them as its kin and, behold,

It shone as fiercely as the brightest star.


Abandoned on the Earth, the Love

In heaven did become a shining star

That shines upon all lovers in this World

Who seek its warmth and light eternally.


Deprived of Love, the heart resented life,

It cried the bitter tears for its loss:

Where have you gone, my Love,

The one that dwelt inside for so long,

The one that shadowed the Sun and opened path to Moon,

The one that poisoned me by sweet and throbbing pain?


You preached eternity, and yet you slipped away,

Unable to forgive a harmless little sham!

Red leaves of fall, who’s crimson shroud

Is envied by the green leaves of the Spring,

Ask mighty wind why blows it off the candle of our love, 

And where it takes our dreams. 

So screamed the heart in misery and pain.




By Liana Margiva


Translated from Russian by Anatol Kardiukov



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 Reviews of "Fog"
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on January 23, 2010
I IMAGINE THAT THERE ARE FOGS IN OUR LIVES WHICH SOME HEARTS, WILL NOT ALLOW TO 'LIFT'...THUS...NO 'LIGHT' CAN ENTER IN. GREAT IMAGERY...DONE WELL AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Margaret Mullings
Reviewed on October 14, 2009
Liana very powerful and moving words!Deeply profound
such an enjoyable read! Thanks for sharing and caring!


Much Love
Always!!!

Reviewed by Shay White
Reviewed on July 3, 2009
What wonderful imagery to this poem, enjoyed it, thanks for sharing.

Reviewed by Ken Chartrand
Reviewed on February 6, 2009
Hello Liana,I read your poem,"Fog". I found that the imagery and metaphorical rythem was quite beautiful. Well done. Please feel free to visit my site here in the"Den"

Reviewed by Paul Mc Cann
Reviewed on January 24, 2009

Liana

How beautiful but cruel ,
and yet so true ,
In the end we leave behind our love
and those who have left us in the fog of life .

Paul

Reviewed by Diana Wiles
Reviewed on January 20, 2009
Simply stunning and beautiful work...

Love, Diana

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
Reviewed on January 11, 2009
Touches the depths of the soul, and the heart. Moving piece Liana! Beautiful write! Hugs, Elizabeth

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on January 10, 2009
A soulful poem which deeply touches one heart. Well done!......M

Reviewed by Richard Orey
Reviewed on January 4, 2009
"...So screamed the heart in misery and pain."

Another stark reminder how well it is to begin each day with a moment of reflection and gratitude for that which we have been privileged to know and to enjoy and for the blessings of love that we share in our memory and in our present.

"Fog" -- Another brilliant and deeply moving poem.

Richard


Reviewed by Theresa Koch
Reviewed on December 31, 2008
WOW powerfully done

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 23, 2008
Your verses reach deeply in my soul, Liana. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes,



Regis

Reviewed by Debra Baker
Reviewed on December 22, 2008
Liana, so glad I dropped in to read this one. I'm waiting for the book...this piece should not end here. It is too lovely. Soar with that pen another chapter.

Reviewed by Barbara Terry
Reviewed on December 20, 2008
This is a very heartfelt write, Liana. It tells of the folly of love, as well as the treacherous waters love tries to breach. Thank you so much for this image rich poetic piece.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your den sister, Barbie

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on December 19, 2008
Writen with so much passion...this is just beautiful!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on December 16, 2008
Passionate and powerful. Liz

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 15, 2008
This is a feast for the senses,so powerful and such passion,an
exceptional poem!

Eileen

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on December 15, 2008
Awesome poetry

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on December 15, 2008
EXQUISITE poetry.....just simply beautiul.

Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on December 15, 2008
"Fog" reflects the deep feelings of lost love and the lonely tremors that vibrate in a saddened heart. Well done...

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 14, 2008
well written translation ...

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on December 14, 2008
Passion and loss are everywhere
but there is also the sweet sadness of an energy that can be transformed into something else, like a poem...

I especially like the strength and complex flow of the last stanza.

Axilea

Reviewed on December 14, 2008
Liana~!

An exquisite write - beautiful!!


LOve & Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on December 14, 2008
Your poetry are beautifully composed
I truly enjoy each one as I
have the pleasure to read them
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on December 14, 2008
Liana, you have written this poem magnificently -- it is filled with rich emotions -- peace to you my friend -- JMW

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on December 14, 2008
Liana, You do write beautifully. -gene.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on December 14, 2008
No wonder you are a star in Russia. Loved it.

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on December 14, 2008
...you have written most beautiful poetry here Liana...and to know that love eternal would be a star in heaven...gives one hope that we yet might find love...when it is lost.
John

Reviewed on December 14, 2008

I have enjoyed the reading of this beautiful poem. "Fog" sings nostalgic romance and stimulates the heart to pump grace and love.

I salute You, Poet.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on December 14, 2008
So Sad but very beautiful write on the ending of a relationship. Well done Liana it was truly enchanting. Love, Bonnie


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