To This Very Nth Of Moment How People So Take For Granted They Will Still Awaken In The Morning Before Dawn Even Comes To Its (Your)End.
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A Poem To Seek The End...
To Seek The End,Your End
You Must 1st Make Amend,
Make Amends 1st To Yourself,Then To All
Humanity; You Seek The Truth,Others Call
Upon To Help You In Finding It,They Must
In End,Your End, Support In Your Trust,
For All Humanity, You Give Of Yourself
And Of Your(Compassion)Love, You (Self)
You Will Not Have To Amend,
To Seek The End, Your End,
It Will Come To You...
Peace, TRASK c 2003 TRASK
Live For Tomorrow,and,You May Live Today...
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Reviews of "As In Search Of What Is Right For You Who Me..."
Brilliant, TRASK! I love your straight-forward and blunt poetry. You make words with your words and it has developed into not just a style, but a need for us all to read. I am not the first to say this, and I won't be the last... you're very wise.
Incredible write Trask...So...will you forgive me... if I ever offended You in any way..and you and you and who else You I missed out on too...and I forgive myself for being myself...and most of all May God forgive us All...for being foolish sometimes...but still honest about our feelings and love we have to give..to others!!
Most incredible Person You!!
Love
Tinka
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on May 31, 2003
Trask, this poem is many things. It is the truth and hope for tomorrow. It is love expressed and lived. It is the best poem you have written. It shows you have a good heart inside. I stopped commenting on you. I did not understnd much of what you wrote, and felt the ones commented on you would give anyone a good comment, understand or not. But this is different. You spoke to our hearts, not our minds. If I do not comment for a while again, don't worry I will be back when I see something that merits a comment. But not something that I do not understand and I think neither do you. Bill
Reviewed by Dove (Reader)
Reviewed on May 30, 2003
TRASK-----
this is the most beautiful write I have seen of yours..! My fav now..
Food for thought here. How does one make amends to one's self, I wonder? Hhhmmmmmm.
Wisdom is apparent, and love for the sharing of it. Blessings, Diane
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WISE WISE words pal! :) Thanks, Teresa
~Joseph
Warm Love
*-Brittany-*
Most incredible Person You!!
Love
Tinka
this is the most beautiful write I have seen of yours..! My fav now..
Peace,
Dove ~
Incredible pic too..
~~Linda~~
Wisdom is apparent, and love for the sharing of it. Blessings, Diane
you are wise, my friend...
and your message shines loud and clear in this beautiful write!
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :)
Love the art yes we do unfortunately take for grant our time on this earth and of our lives.
Excellent message here Trask.
Peggy
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)