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___2-12-02 Short and, Sweet , Always To Be Descret,Yet, Nobody, No Priest, Preacher, Rabbi, Religion, You Can Bet, Can Save You , Your (Self), Soul... Brainwashed in the Beginning, Only To Still Be Sin - ing, In The End... In Church Pass That Basket, That $ Price $You Pay For Your ( Self ) Soul___ To Sway You (Your) Religion (Satan ) Has Done Just That... Just What In This Holy Hell (World) Did You Get In Return(?), Misery, Pain, Strain,True, Just Look . What You Did To Your ( Self ) Soul... You $ Sold $ ( It ) Soul To (Satan) In His" Greed " Helped Pay For Some Preachers $ Need(s) $, Only to Fatten His (There) Bank Account(s)... His (There) ** Churches, Synagogues, Palace's They Built In There (De) Fame, As (Laughing) They Live In Splendor, Laugh . You, They, Took Your Moneys $$$, And, Next To Be About Sleeping ,Sin, In The Streets, It Can Happen To You, (Within) A Blink Of His ( Satan's the Devils ) Eye... Preacher, Preacher, Why are You Not My Besceeher; I Paid You For My Sanctity, Why, Are You . Peace, I Am Deny... You Molested My (Soul)(Children) Self,You Took My Dignity, You Laugh (Abuse) Behind My Back(s), Try Deny Me, I Am (Are) Oh, So Alone.. The End Is Here,Only You (Self) Can Save Your Soul (Very) Self), If Not ___ Yes, You and, Your Preacher Go To (Your) His Same Holy Hell... You Are (Cannot) Still (Be) Not Free You Are (Cannot) Never Will Be You Are (Cannot) In The Eye's Of (God)... Retribution, TRASK c1979 / 2002 TRASK
___To your Own Holy Hell... ** As There Monuments, Churches, Glass Castles, Synagogues Will Crumble . Your Feet,___ Try To Run, But, Don't Look Back As The Sooner You Go To Satans (His) Holy Hell... For (God) Knows Fall Of Even A (Little Bird) Sparrow, How Can You Be So Gullible As So Narrow Minded To Even Think You Can Hide Your Very___ Thoughts(Self),i.e. Even I, TRASK Know What, Nary, You're Thinking Of Only Your Uncompassionate Asinined Incompatible Self (s)___ Your Own " Inequities ", i.e. Self Centered Greed...

Reviewed by chris

Reviewed on February 14, 2002

Outstanding and to the point! I, unfortunately, have seen exactly what you are talking about way too many times.

Thanks,
Michael

Reviewed by D. Enise

Reviewed on February 13, 2002

This piece, as all have been , very powerful.. Interpretations, can vary so, Always causes me to be in awe and wonder.. reflections, soul searching.. and most always so deeply touched.
Your words, ring so true , they touch me to tears.. That "some" churches that use & teach by example & preach~that seem to not follow what they are there to teach..Love ~All
I do hope.. I refuse to loose that. That someday they will let go of what they believe they need, and let themselves "feel".. such joy they are missing..and I fear what they may see when it is time to look in the mirror..
Sometimes.. I have to read your work, time and time again..But then sometimes I need not, my heart responds before my mind even gets the chance to catch up.
Excellent work Trask.. Excellent!
Such vivid pictures of truths..
How I got to know Jesus?... I do not know.. I just could always feel him with me..even without having known of the book, or the buildings..I still feel..
You may think that strange? I just never questioned .. (though I did question many things.. just not his presence).
I believe we are the only ones who can save our souls..we after all have "choice"

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on February 12, 2002

2-12-02
VS

Tell Me How Is It & Just How did You Get to Know Jesus???

TRASK

Reviewed by Valerie Salazar (Reader)

Like I said you an excellent author but the subject is sore for me. I Love Jesus, and I feel bad that you don't know him as I do. He's my salvation, yours to if you chose.