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Oasis
by Elizabeth A. Price → (All Poetry by Elizabeth A. Price)
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Lying under the desert sun

Surrounded by miles of barren sand

Here is where my journey ended

Here is where I alone could no longer stand


Wind blowing gritty waves

Coating my parched skin

Every cell in my body was screaming for love

Fading, my hope caving in

 

Here you came and held out your hand

Lifting me from my bleached grave

Your love a life preserving oasis

From this desperate land

 

Your sustaining arms

Heartened my soul

I drank from your lips

The nourishing waters

Of enchantment

 

Quickly returning me to life

Quickly reigniting my craving wish

Hungry to please your heart's desire

Hungry with my ardent eagerness
 

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 Reviews of "Oasis"
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on February 17, 2008
Liz,
I love the originality of the line "Wind blowing gritty waves". A profound write with creative metaphors and imagery!
Sheila

Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)
Reviewed on August 13, 2006
What a wonderfully romantic write filled with so much creative symbolism. A lovely read, thank you. Panda :)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 12, 2006
I find an oasis powerfully symbolic and you prove that once again via your verses, Elizabeth. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by K. Mulroney
Reviewed on August 10, 2006
Beautiful!!!! I have missed reading you! Glad ya followed!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 8, 2006
love's oasis saved you from a desert of unfulfilled desire ... nice!

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on August 7, 2006
the caravan has arrived!
and love it is, indeed.
peace,
carolyn

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on August 7, 2006
"hope caving in" is certainly a place that every human being visits more than once in their lives.

I enjoyed the heartcry in this piece to be loved and reanimated from the desert and lethargies of aloneness. A strong statement indeed!

Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on August 7, 2006
sounds like love to me...


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