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I Lost My Place in Line
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I Lost My Place in Line


 


In the beginning:


I stood with everyone else behind


I was number one in your life


You relied on me for everything


You were the stars in my life


Just the way it was meant to be


 


But you grew up and went to school


Made friends and learned all the rules


I was still in the front row


But I had to share with others though


Just the way it was meant to be


 


Now you cut off our phone calls


When the special one comes home


Now I stand way behind in line


He fills the whole first row


Just the way it was meant to be


 


Now you’re swollen with your own child


You’ll be the first in their row for a while


But then they too will grow and grow away


And they’ll find that special someone some day


Just the way it was meant to be


 


You’ll look around bewildered just like me


Then you can join me at the end of their line


There’s still a lot of love back here


For us feeling left behind


Because that’s the way it’s meant to be.


 


 


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 Reviews of "I Lost My Place in Line"
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on January 4, 2008
A very realistic write, Liz! Though I'm not a parent, even I can see the truth in this. You give this poem a powerful voice with the repetition and change of that one line. This piece is creative, sad, and meaningful all at once. Bravo~
Sheila

Reviewed by K. Mulroney
Reviewed on June 6, 2007
Oh Liz. . this was awesome! You made me want to cry! Damn it. Why do they have have to learn to walk and talk, especially the talk part. They go on and on and on. . .fine, I'll go back to the end of the line, it's quieter back there anyway!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 4, 2007
A realistic (if sad) perspective on the way of life and of being a parent, Liz. Still, there is this cyclical dimension and, as you put it, eventually the "child" comes back "home." Well done. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Jill Carpenter (Reader)
Reviewed on April 4, 2007
Hi Elizabeth!

The last part of your poem nicely outlines the very best part of the whole cycle. I think the 20s and early 30s are the years that children can be most distant, so many "more important" things take up their time and attention during those years. But once they've passed that point, they begin to get closer to their parents again and realize how very much they really have in common. That's when everything you put into raising that child comes back to you in full. It's a lovely thing, and one of the more welcome aspects of getting older. I think that too was meant to be. :o)

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on April 3, 2007
You know, you nurture, strive, sacrifice for the sake of your child, only to have that child turn and push you away further and further with each growing year. Yes, because that's the way it was meant to be.

Be safe,
Karen


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