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I looked at myself today
Discovered I was old
As my mother stared back at me
I'm just not as cold
No longer the devil-may-dare kid
No longer the rebel on a skid
No longer Zorrow with a cape
No longer the shapely shape
Distress saddened my thoughts
That lingered in the oughts
When I realized life has promise
In the time God gives us.


 


 


 


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Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on June 20, 2008
This is wonderful. The first four lines...excellent!

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on January 1, 2008
Great job, Liz. :)Sheila

Reviewed by Mary Coe
Reviewed on December 19, 2007
Very well penned.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 11, 2007
I can relate. I surprise myself so many times realizing time has gone by. I never think myself as "older." Denial much? Nicely expressed, Liz. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on November 5, 2007
Boy, I remember the day I saw my Mom in me. It was truly depressing until I remembered that I have many of her wonderful qualities. It isn't so bad getting old afterall.

Kathy

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on November 4, 2007
The first four lines of this poem are so powerful Liz, yet they can be terrifying.

There are days where we see one side of reality and others where other aspects are revealed that prove that life is multifaceted experience.

Aging is also a form of accomplishment, a graceful smile to the rest of the world and tons of wonderful knowledge to be shared.

Warmest best,

Axilea

Reviewed by Charles Keller
Reviewed on November 4, 2007
Hang in there, Kiddo... I have socks older than you!

Check out my "Images" which I wrote over 20 years ago.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on November 4, 2007
We all age Elizabeth but I refuse to get old, for I believe we are only as old as we chose to be. We have five children and nine grandchildren, I have a birthday coming up in a few weeks and I will be just another year older in years, Thanks for the great write that made me think.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed on November 4, 2007
yep can relate to this

Reviewed by Jean Pike
Reviewed on November 4, 2007
You expressed this so well, Elizabeth. It is scary, the first time you look in the mirror and really see your age. I love the note of hope at the end, and remember, not older...BETTER!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 4, 2007
I never have really worried about getting old. Now that I am, hell, I just go with the flow . . . No sense beating yourself up about something there is nothing you can do about it . . .


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