Hello Liz,

A magnificent penning . . . outstanding!!


Hugs,

Lance

A compelling and powerfully expressive write, Elizabeth. Love, peace, strength, and best wishes to you,

Regis

Liz,
Thank you for sharing these feelings. You, more than most, know the emotions you express here all too well. I like the title and the last line because they show the depth of your feelings and how there's no escape from them. I continuously think of you as both victim and champion of bipolar illness. I hope you see yourself as champion of it sometimes, too! Love and Hugs to you~
Sheila

yes lifes a TWITCH sometimes, you did it up pretty good :-)

Very touching. A powerful write.

Liz, this is exquisite writing. I don't have words to add to what the others have already said. Just know I understand...

You chose a very fitting format for this poem and the feelings it conveys of something that holds you down, of sorrow that drags you to the bottom. Writing and communicating with other writers can certainly bring lighter feelings and positive thoughts. I hope so...

Axilea

Amazingly succinct resume of the downward spiral that resounds with so much power, speaking into our conscious and unconscious dark bits. It's tough deciding when enough IS, in fact, enough, but knowing that the only way to go thereafter is up puts iron in the soul. But I do know all too well the feeling of that lead in the boots which then infiltrates all your bones, too. There is no pain like emotional pain, that's for sure. Wishing you parting heavens and great updraughts of sunshine and joy to transport you to a happy place. All tunnels come to an end eventually. Bless you, Kate xx

Been there, Liz. Did the low chemistry come after the cut ties, or did the chemistry cause the ties....one of the questions I have to ask myself. You've struck a resonant chord for many here...Jerry

Liz,
There is no worse feeling than fear, it is so emotionally crippling, and physically paralizing....I can feel the anguish in your words well penned about seeking closure & I hope it's doors open & embrace you in your journey
Closure Is Such A Beautiful Blessing
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie

Oh my,excellent writing sweet lady..enjoyed very much...take care OK...Hugs

'Low feeling from low chemistry that makes pain continue endlessly'-----------BEAUTIFUL, LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Powerful write here, fear of closeness of intimacy is something i have had to overcome, thank you for sharing
God Bless
Michelle~

The fear of intimacy is like a clam being torn from its shell. Your words touch a cord with "flight risk" - relationships that parachute way too soon. Hold on to the feeling a little longer Liz, pull the ripcord a little higher...add layers to the mood...body chemistry is elevated by hormones and pheromones...I sense a vast striving for connection here...good moon viewing and casting fate to the winds will boost your chemistry keeping with your craft of poetry...take care.

Love Always,
Sage

You reach out and grab my heart with this one. Time needed to gather inner strength and really see that beautiful, strong person in the mirror.....

Be always safe,
Karen

It's said you have to become fear to conquer it.No easy task,but if we do it then we can erase the low feeling,etc...Excellent write Liz! ET

Low feeling
From low chemistry
That makes
Pain continue endlessly"

Beautiful pen!