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Sandpiper
by Elizabeth A. Price → (All Poetry by Elizabeth A. Price)
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I hope this never comes true . I hope the lower price of gas doesn't stop the building of alternative energy sources. I hope...

 

Sandpiper
 
Walked the beach hand in hand
My granddaughter and me enjoying the sand
Carefree day set aside for enjoying
Nature and the sea breeze blowing
 
My offspring’s offspring looked ahead
Trembling, pointed out a mother sandpiper lying dead
At surf’s edge slicked with oil and limp without life
Her offspring darting, not willing to give up the fight
 
The baby sandpiper returned to her mother time after time
Looking for help and guidance on what to do with the slime
No longer white and the surf coating her black
She wanted her old easy way of life back
 
Crying my granddaughter ran to the little bird
As it slowed in its efforts, her cry could be heard
Caught up in my granddaughters arms
A questioning look on how such creatures could come to harm
 
She held up the baby sandpiper, now dead
In shame I bowed my head
For my apathy about off shore drilling
I drove my granddaughter away crying

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 Reviews of "Sandpiper"
Reviewed by Jerry Engler
Reviewed on November 29, 2008
Hateful that your little girl had to be so crushed, Liz. Thanks for having the fortitude to write it...Jerry

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on November 28, 2008
You bring us to this awful scene with your vivid imagery, Liz. I like the contrast of emotions in this poem; walking with your grandbaby in innocence, and then viewing the destruction of innocence. You seem to be "back" with this poem...maybe a bit? Hope so. You've been on my mind. Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
Reviewed on November 28, 2008
Such a very sad picture you paint, Liz. Very emotional and very well written. Best, Elizabeth

Reviewed by Mary Coe
Reviewed on November 25, 2008
Thanks for sharing this. An excellent write.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 25, 2008
Such a damning statement of our "evil oily" ways, Liz. Believe me. I know this from my fight with oil companies. Thank you. Love, hugs, and best wishes to you and to you grand daughter,

Regis

Reviewed on November 25, 2008
Liz,

Yes, very sad . . . !!


Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on November 25, 2008
indeed very sad, although very well written, love holly

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 25, 2008
So very sad. And I hope our new leaders now pursue alternative energy, as they claim they finally will, or this horrendous scene will be repeated, over and over again, through your granddaughter's entire lifetime.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 25, 2008
It is sad we often get so immune to so much talking about action for the defence of our environment that after a while our ears go deaf and our eyes go blind and perhaps it takes the children who will be the adults of tomorrow to renew our hope.

fee

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on November 24, 2008
Wonderful sentiments and thoughts, but our fate I am afraid is in the hands of those that lobby in behalf of the oil industry. Maybe a little common sense and less greed would help too...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on November 24, 2008
Very touching write

"My offspring’s offspring looked ahead" my fav line, you are truly blessed.

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on November 24, 2008
This is very sad Elizabeth and is one of the best reasons to get off the oil bandwagon. It is a polluter. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Jean Pike
Reviewed on November 24, 2008
Sad...

Reviewed on November 24, 2008
This one hits in the heart - we, the little guys, have no say so in the matter. Those in charge make the rules ... heartbreaking!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 24, 2008
Wow Liz! You have me with tears,such a bitterseet poem,and so beautifully written!I feel the frustration too being unable to
do anything about it!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed on November 24, 2008
Elizabeth,

In the beginning I felt your pleasure walking with your granddaughter.
But I had to cry at the end. Because although we hope it won't happen, we know it might. What are we doing to ourselves! This really touched me.

Mary

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on November 24, 2008
So sad a write, so sad she had to learn so early what we do to this land and ocean. So sad but your write was absolutely touching and loving...Love, Bonnie

Reviewed by Jennifer Christian
Reviewed on November 24, 2008
Perhaps the auto makers will give some further thought to their inventions now that they've been refused a government bailout. I hope too.

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on November 24, 2008
I asked my husband the same question yesterday...if the lower cost of gas would make the fight for alternative energy sources fly away...
Cryssa


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