Onward (poem) by Elizabeth A. Price on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Cryssa C

Reviewed on February 18, 2009

Maybe sometimes it appears that there is no pause for anything... but to those who witness a birth, life pauses for a moment while we gaze at that little piece of heaven. Likewise...when a loved one dies...maybe the world doesn't pause, but I know that my heart skips a beat now and then as I pause...and remember...them.

Cryssa

Reviewed by Jerry Engler

Reviewed on February 18, 2009

Very good perspective, Liz. I had the same thing pointed out to me this week at the funeral service of my step-mother, that with her 18th, 19th and 20th great grandchildren born this month, it might have seemed like time for her generation to flow on out of the world.....Jerry

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on February 16, 2009

Interesting philosophical perspective, Liz. Thank you for sharing it. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on February 15, 2009

yes we must go on, nice analogy and rant Liz

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on February 14, 2009

Liz,
It's sad to think of life going on without us, but it's true. The next generation takes over. In fact, I've noticed many elderly folk allow the younger generation full reign while they're still alive. A poem that makes me think. Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on February 14, 2009

Liz~!

You exceed so well with these writes - perfection here!!

Happy Valentine's Day,

Lance

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on February 13, 2009

Yes but the power to stop and smell the roses can slow down that steamroller we know as life if we take the option to try.

Fee

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on February 13, 2009

Elizabeth,
In eight great lines you speak hundreds, certainly more than 'just some thoughts'. I enjoy the depth here.
John

Reviewed by Jean Pike

Reviewed on February 13, 2009

Great poem, Elizabeth. We'd love for time to pause, wouldn't we, but as you've said, it doesn't.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 13, 2009

Powerful writing, Elizabeth; very well written!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Bonnie May

Reviewed on February 13, 2009

POWERFUL WRITE although short, it said it all...love and hugs, Bonnie

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 13, 2009

Thought provoking excellence, Elizabeth, well penned.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Carin Spirit

Reviewed on February 13, 2009

Life is this moment and the next... Wonderful push for the frightened, still living yesterday. Thank you for sharing. Warmth and Love, Carin