I love haiku/senryu. Thank you for sharing this thought-provoking one, Liz. From Wikipedia regarding the difference between "haiku" and "senryu": "...they both have a similar construction. A haiku is usually about nature and has more of a serious tone while a senryu is more often about human activities or doings and often has a more joking tone." Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,
I believe it's a senryu, Elizabeth (5/7/5) -- and it's lovely. Well done and a pleasure to read.
Hugs,
CJ
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on June 7, 2011
This is a combination of the two, Elizabeth. Haiku's are 100% about nature, senryu's are about anything else. The first and last line are senryu's, the middle one, haiku. Matters not they are all, taken together, beautiful.
Axilea
Sheila
Regis
Blessings,
Christine
Indeed, Haiku, but who cares, it's the feel and emotional impact that matter. TY
Love,
Chanti Lace xo
i don't care about the form,
this is the work of a beautiful soul.
John
in the beauty
~Liz~
just a few of
your words make
it so
Lady Vivian
Hugs,
CJ
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