Kimmy, I don't think I've ever read a ku with so many things to think about. If anyone could construct this any better, I dare them to try. This is bleeping excellent.
Rusty
'Thar she blows!' Tempted to say that it alludes to when a guy passes the fifty mark, he discovers a changing erection - one that doesn't grow in quite the same rampant way as before, one that he has to use quick while it's up!
Bawdy stuff, hen!
ROFLMSAO!!! Hahaha!!! Sweetie, we are not only on the same page -- we are on the same WORD!!! Talk about being tuned in! The previous reviewers seem to have sensed the message. This is excellent, Kimmy. You are REACHING the reader with this one. Bottle what you did here, and you'll make a fortune! You need to be in the spring edition of Art With Words. Let's see about making that happen. This one rocks!
Very interesting Ku and yes I can see how there is a lot more to this then what you see but like all good poetry it tends to just lay the seed and allow the reader to form or creat his own ideas around it. I would certainly love to hear what this would read like as one of your regular works though. Well done.
Fee
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on January 8, 2007
Well constructed ku in modern style (the early eastern kus dealt with nature usually). And one can understand the underlying meanings. Victor
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"Weathercock Man (5-7-5 format)"
Very subliminal must say.
Chrissy
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(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
Brett
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Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
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Carole
Rusty
Bawdy stuff, hen!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel ;o)
Love,
CJ
Excellent Haiku. A fantastic creation.
Ted
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