Indelible scribe Newfangled rise Dipped, feathery style Emerges, mind-bending wiles Lasting quills Ink on, pine By a soul’s fluidly spills Layered, kissing, rhymes Ever and ever, for lasting times Soothed in prose Composed in might Righting muse Indite my writes Biding with truth Effigy’s take flight...
Ohhhhhh I always leave your den so happy, refreshed, ready to jump the globe, lol..Love you girl and have MISSED YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!YOUR AMAZING..The woman who can do anything...
A sense of warm bliss is what is indelibly scribed upon my spirit after reading this precious acrostic, dearest Kimmy! What a delight!
{{{{{{{hugs}}}}}}} and love,
Alexandra*
Great write, very well composed and expressive. I enjoy the acrostic poems and love to have my first grade students write them, it is always fun to see what they come up with. Enjoyed, you are a poet of many styles my friend, very talented indeed.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on January 13, 2007
Well composed. I've seen a lot of these acrostic poems, but have never done one. Victor
Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on January 13, 2007
Cool one, Kimmy! An acrostic with rhyme no less. And "composed in might," as always.
We can only hope, Kimmy, that when we write, and what we pour our guts and soul into, does not just become an effigy of the real thing. Your write is to be applauded. Some brainpower here. perhaps you'll end up being the Nextcat! (-:
by Paul Berube (author) at 1/13/2007 7:47:33 AM
Kimmy,
Aweful sorry for the blank under my name in the review. I don't know what happened. Probably hit the wrong button. (lol) Just wanted you to know that I thought your poem was outstanding. The parchment it is written on will never wither and the ink will never fade. When one writes from the heart he/she writes for eternity. Blessings to You and Yours Always, Paul.
Inspirational poetry, written from the heart and soul. Verses that are well-suited for reading on a rainy day and that are guaranteed to bring a smile to your face.
This is a book of free verse poetry that addresses the seven main tests in life and offers some sensible solutions to passing those tests with minimal discomfort.
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Keep it up and have a wonderful day Kimmy,
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm
In Spirit agape,
JO
{{{{{{{hugs}}}}}}} and love,
Alexandra*
enjoyed.....Art Sun...
Love, Lena
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Ted
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Kimmy,
Aweful sorry for the blank under my name in the review. I don't know what happened. Probably hit the wrong button. (lol) Just wanted you to know that I thought your poem was outstanding. The parchment it is written on will never wither and the ink will never fade. When one writes from the heart he/she writes for eternity. Blessings to You and Yours Always, Paul.
Love Tinka
Love,
CJ
I have enjoyed the reading of this inspiring work.
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Peace and Love,
Joselyn
Cleverly done too...
Brett
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