Speaking of Jaybirds... (poem) by Kimmy Van Kooten on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 15, 2009

An enjoyable poem to read.take care

Edwin

Reviewed by H Cruz

Reviewed on March 14, 2009

Wow, just like Dr. Doolitle; beak speak. lol

Reviewed on March 12, 2009

Kimmy,
Love the strands and threads, the breaks and runs, language forced into meaning, and the excellent vocab. Great work!
John

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on March 12, 2009

Nice to have you back, such an upbeat, enlightening piece....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on March 12, 2009

Methinks this is about the Foo Fighters. Your amazing artwork matches the text.

Ron

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on March 12, 2009

I love your work, Kimmy, awesome naked wordybuff, luff ;)

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on March 12, 2009

Hi Kimmy, long time no see.
First, that picture I have seen a few times after a couple of rounds with Captain Morgan dark rum, nice of you to keep as souvenir!
Now the poem, sure you didn't dip on my bottle girl? better that bird don't wake me before O-500!

Georg

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 12, 2009

Great write and piccy, Kimmy; love it! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 12, 2009

KIMMY!!!!

Oh, how you've been missed. Welcome home!!

This has a wild, Dr. Suess-ian feel to it - wonderment in verse and in image! Thanks for presenting your gift - truly, a magical one, in these lines. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on March 12, 2009

Very nice indeed sweet lady...nice to read you again..I have missed you and your wonderful writing..stay safe and well..Hugss

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on March 12, 2009

Hey Kimmy good to see your name come up again on my review list and with such an exceptional write... the metaphor of birds and bands to people and life is a great one. Could almost hear the different chatter.

hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on March 12, 2009

are those dollar signs in that art work? OK the expression left me dizzy...however anything naked I usually like :) Another one which would be fun as a spoken piece, it's gotta rhythm to beat

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on March 11, 2009

Tie-dyed skinnydipping...love the threads, baby...shades of Ray Stevens The Streaker...beat this out on the congas and call the tweets to the seed and the nuns to oversee the Blues Brothers, puttin' the band back together...R-E-S-P-E-C-T is here with Aretha...Rockin' Robin Michael Jackson...the Byrds Turn Turn Turn...Art Work is mod! Squad...thanks for what you said on my note over at facebook a while back...you know I dig it...be well...

Love,
Sage